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I am so happy to hear you like the music in the game! 😊🎶 If you are interested, please check out the artists who created the music and their other works. They all have profiles on pixabay.com, where I downloaded their works, and you can find the names of the artists on the credits page at the end of the game. Alternately, I should have added information / links in the info section of each of the files, so you can access their profiles from there too! Thank you for checking out the game!! 

Wow! Thank you so much for your review!! It means a lot to me, to be able to read about your experience of the game. I am really happy to hear that you enjoyed the game and the story, and that it was able to convey some of the deeper feelings that I tried to portray in the game. Really glad too that you enjoyed the side characters, because all of them are crucial elements of the story… and now that I am working on creating a second edition of the game, I actually have been thinking about adding side stories for these characters. 

Thank you again for your detailed review and for checking out the game!! 😊💖

Wow you've created another VN! I just finished reading through it. I really like the atmosphere you've built up throughout the game... especially with the BGM and sounds! They managed to convey a deep sense of sadness and despair... and longing for the past. The end of the story really took me by surprise! Is the story a reference to a myth? I looked it up but I don't think I found the right references! I really like the art in the game as well... especially the backgrounds with the night sky and mountain scenery!

I certainly had fun with some of the detours I took in the story!! LOL! You guys really did a great job!! 

I probably will not be joining any game jam soon because I want to finish up all my incomplete projects! >< Though I hope to see more of your VNs in the future!! 

This was such a heart-warming story! I was a little wary with the choices I made but glad things turned out fine in the end! 😄 I loved all the characters in the game, especially Phoebe! She's such a good friend!! The plot of the story really drew me in and I didn't stop playing at all until I reached the end! I also really enjoyed the little twist at the end... I think it adds extra meaning to the story! 

I loved the art, and the character design! The black and white aesthetics really matches the story. 

I wish I was able to play your game during the game jam period... but something came up and I had to travel and did not have consistent wifi! 

All in all, this was a really lovely game with a meaningful message... and was fun to read and play through! Along with the art I can almost imagine this as a picture book! 

Thank you for your kind review! 😊💖 I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed the story and its setting!! 

 Thank you also for pointing out the language errors!!! Haha.. yes I used to study French a while ago but haven’t used it in a long time… OMG!! I need to practise again!! I will definitely correct them in the upcoming versions of the game! 😅 

Just to add… Sister Agnes has a few different lines in the other route… if you ever do read it and find any errors, please let me know! I’d really appreciate your input! 😊✍🏻

Thank you for your review and your support! It means a lot to me! 😊💝

Thanks!! 😊💖

Thank you for your kind review and for checking out the game! 😊💖 I am really happy to hear that you enjoyed the experience! 

I took a break and checked out your game! Wow, I have to say it was really really interesting. Your writing really drew me in even though I don't usually read stories with a medieval setting and I am quite unfamiliar with a lot of the terms and setting. But it was fun learning about the Eastern European landscape in the Middle Ages... this is definitely new for me! I really like the subtle BGM... it is a great accompaniment for the story without giving away too much of what's to come. I kind of went around in circles a little when I got to the part where I was supposed to explore the village, but I really appreciate how the choices change and they guide you back to where you are supposed to go. Are there different endings to Chapter 1? I got myself in trouble at the end! LOL! 

One thing I would prefer though is having the option to rollback to a previous choice, and a history log for the VN so that I can go back and refer to details that came up before. But other than that I really like the game and the format that you've chosen! The hand-drawn illustrations really add to the experience!! I can't wait to see what eventually happens in the story!!! 

I'll definitely do that! I took a look at your page just now and your VN looks fun!!! I might only be able to read it a little later though (last week of Oct) because something came up and I'll need to prepare for a trip!

Thanks for your kind review! 💖 I am happy to hear that you enjoyed the story! 😊 About the pixelated transitions... they are caused by lagging in the browser version of the game. I would recommend playing the downloaded version if you don't mind downloading the game into your computer! No pixelated transitions are used in the game, and in the downloaded version there will be no issues with delays in music and sound effects, which really gives you the full experience of the story! 

Thank you again for checking out my game!!

I just finished playing the whole game! The story is really meaningful and I am glad it is not too scary! 😊 I had to turn off the music because it was a bit intense for me (I am just easily spooked, but for a game centred around ghosts I think it really sets the mood). I didn't find the mini games too difficult to understand, and I am glad we're always given pointers. I didn't look at what was inside the pool... were we supposed to? I just followed everyone's advice and did what the characters suggested. I tried once to go to the pool, but I was told to not go there... and I am now very curious what is in there... but I am not sure if I want to know... 😰

Thank you for checking out my game and for your kind review! 💖

This was such a fun game! Are we supposed to go inside the cafeteria though? I managed to prevent losing too much HP the second round! The doggie was so cute! 🥰 Almost had a heart attack when I saw its life points went down to the last heart!! 

I built my game using Ren’Py, which is able to build a web version of the game. I saw that your game was built using Tyrano Builder… I am not familiar with that engine… but if they have that function you should be able to do that. 

I wanted to play your game but I am not on Windows! 😣

I got killed by a stonefish first and then the anglerfish before I managed to date anyone!! Haha! I love mermaids and ocean themes! I love the ocean BG in the game and the effects you added to it! It was fun getting to know about the different kinds of marine creatures in the Australian waters... I didn't even know what an anglerfish was before!

😔 Yep... RIP to all the characters... But I think they will have much happier lives next time around! 

Thanks for checking out the game!! 😊 I am happy you found William sweet!! 🥰 Haha! Yes... the MC had a hard time coming to terms with the fact that nothing of her old world was left... the good and the bad... that's why she kept running away from William!! 

SUMMARY:

When Pei-er wakes up from a long slumber one day, she finds that the world around her has irrevocably changed. But.. but… she had only carelessly fallen asleep out in the woods one sleepy afternoon… or so she thought.

A strange man who she comes to know as Mr. Bill tells her that she can no longer go back to the world she once knew. But how can things have changed, when that precious person she has always held in her heart is still there, showing up one day most unexpectedly?

FEATURES: 

• Customisable name and side image
• An original story with more than 40k words 
• 6 different endings 
• Progress page
• Some jump scares!! 

SPOOKTOBER VISUAL NOVEL JAM EDITION:

Created for 2022 Spooktober Visual Novel Jam

This game was made within a month for the Spooktober Jam. Updates might come after October and a more polished version of the game might be released afterwards.

FREE TO DOWNLOAD OR PLAY ON BROWSER

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Thank you for your kind review! 😊 I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed the story and the game experience!! 

Thanks!! 😊

SUMMARY:

Sean Tovin has always been oblivious to the feelings his childhood friend and distant cousin Marin Collins has for him. 

Play as Sean and re-experience your memories of Marin... Will you realise how much she cares for you? Or will you make the same choices all over again? 

ABOUT:

Memories of Marin is a demo / side story for an upcoming project, That Summer's Day. Marin Collins is one of the main visual novel's three interests for the protagonist Sean Tovin. This demo / side story is a tribute to Marin's feelings for Sean, and her memories of him.  

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This is so beautiful and heartwarming! I had so much fun going through the game!! The ducks were really cute too!! I love the characters, and the relationship between Penelope and Odysseus!