Lovely game, very well written. I got Will good ending and I enjoyed it so much that I am reluctant to read another route XD 

I like all the backround and explanations about what it is to be a gost (the obsession, the emotions that can be dangerous, etc.)

However, I am French and I couldn't help but notice some mistakes in the sentences pronounced by Sister Agnes:

*"Ouvre la porte! Je sais que tu EST dedans!": the verb is mispelled ("est" is for the third person singular. The second person should be "es"), and the last word is a bit akward. It would be correct to write it like this instead: "Ouvre la porte! Je sais que tu es à l'intérieur!"

*"Mais qu'est-ce qui se passe les enfants? Pourquoi criez-vous?": "crier" in french doesn't mean "to cry", but "to shout". To cry="pleurer". So, the correct sentence would be "Pourquoi pleurez-vous?".

Sorry to point out these errors, but when you are french, those are quite immersion breaking. But I know how it is difficult to write in a foreign langage, my english is very akward^^

Apart from this, congratulation, this was a very pleasant story.

I got will's good ending... and teared up all through the end! Lovely story, insanely well put for the amount of time of the jam, lovely music and phase as well! Truly a beautiful game <3

A very sweet, wistful story that carries a lot of emotional impact. I'm always intrigued by stories about ghosts investigating their own pasts. I liked that even the scary ghosts weren't really evil, and I enjoyed the setting. One thing I'd change is those pixelated transitions--that just feels like a very high-tech looking transition for a story that's mostly about history.

The art was really nice and the story was impressive for a game written in a month. Great job on making a game with a lot of heart.

It feels sad :'(

This was lovely.  William is so sweet!  The MC was frustratingly slow at understanding what was happening.  Haha.  But loved it.  Lovely UI too.