i really like this one. it's very short, you can finish the whole thing in like 20-40 mins, but i dont mind that much lol. gizatsuki's character design is excellent, you can tell exactly what sorta person they are lol. the dream sequences are more linear than in yn+a lot of its fangames, which isn't inherently a bad thing but there were quite a few times i wished there was a little more there, or where i thought there was intended to be more that didn't get put in. it does stand very well on its own though as dev says! it doesn't feel incomplete at all. i also really liked the gender themes, particularly where they were expressed more subtly such as in the butterfly museum or even the graffiti in the alley. there are a lot of ynfg -- or yn itself even -- where i think its trying to say smth about gender but doesnt really know how to say it, or didnt intend to say it. so it's refreshing that it's so implicit in this game.
anyways. thank you dev for sharing! i do hope you expand more on this someday but if not it was still a pleasure to play!
edit: i forgot to say, i like the art a lot too. and the environment design specifically in the desert and butterfly museum are up there with some of my favorite dreams ive seen in a ynfg!