My 2 cents; it's an alright story, unfortunately predictable, though it would've been cool if you had a choice at the start whether to ... 'partake' or not. It's... an interesting choice to make the MC an absolute pushover...
Lughir
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Please put this one back in the kitchen, it's not even raw, it's just some ingredients. The game needs a lot of work in the movement, camera work and interface. Once that is working without actively working against the player (at least there are standardized controls), it can grow into something worth demoing. I think there's passion here, but right now, I have to stop trying (playing is not the right word), otherwise I won't give it a second chance later, and I do want to.
Good to see you're not doing this alone anymore. A burden shared is a burden lessened. But don't let it get too much to your head. People will be people, most can be ignored :)
Now for my personal opinion on this, yes, it was short, but it was sweet and I think complete for what it was. The art is great, the story is a familiar one, clearly, but one with potential.
Keep up the good work! And as others have already said, try to let go of the criticism a bit, focus on constructive feedback!
Not bad, not bad! The content is a little meager, obviously, and having to manually install the game is a bit of an annoyance, but it hardly lowers the enjoyment. I hope this starts off well for ya! Also... might want to change the logo on the restaurant, kinda weird with the different owner and all that ;)