You have a good start here i didn't notice any glaring flaws or anything though i did notice an odd grammatical mistake, you wrote: "rather sooner then later" a couple of times, it should be: "sooner rather then later" it's a small thing but it reads better.
Other then that you have an interesting premise and so far the characters we've met have been interesting even if we haven't really spoken to them much yet
In the top right corner you'll notice some symbols, the third one along is the save button, press it then you get a menu for multiple saves, on the left side of that menu is more of the same symbols, press one to save. If you want to load a save just press the play button in the same menu next to the save you just made
Its an interesting game and i enjoy the world and story but i cant help feeling that the mc is... useless? they lack any form of agency and cant seem to do anything themself, i know they dont understand the world around them but it really feels like you could give the mark to any of the other characters and there would be no point to the mc. also the personality system locks in a little too early for my tastes
