Thank you a lot for the critics!
I've tried to mitigate the dullness of repetition by giving the PC some agency, but I suppose it is not strong enough.
Thank you everybody! It means a lot to me.
Great! How can I contact you privately?
I've almost finished my game, but as a non-native speaker, I need help with the proof-reading. Is there anyone kind enough to lend me a hand with it?
Thanks for the good news!
I have a question: what if I send English translation of my older Russian work, would it be valid as an original work?