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           Story: 7/10 Graphics: 8/10 Characters: 5/10

Well guys, this game's story is interesting and somewhat unique. Although the main character wishing for more in life is a frequently used trope, the modeling environment isn't. This setting seems to show potential for a engaging story about fighting the corrupts in the system to protect those around you.

The overall renders are good, with complex lighting and detailed backgrounds. The character models aren't bad either. They all look distinct, and change appearance depending on the situation. The animations show a noticeable upgrade as the chapters go on, they aren't bad at any point, but the fact that they seem to be evolving is a good omen for the game's future.

The characters are a bit weird. They seem to have perfectly fine backstories, but their "events" just kind of happen, with little build up to it, making the whole thing seem off paced. This pacing issue ends up making the character feel shallower than they really are.

The mini-games where a pleasant surprise, providing a nice optional detour during the playthrough. The multiple languages available are also a nice touch.

For a dev's first game, this is a pretty solid start. Even if it still early in development, it is still worthy to play. I look forward to see how this game will end up.

Sorry for bad english 

Good luck this time.

its being a while since ive playde this, so forgive me if im wrong. I belive its only avaliable if you get max score on your apologie to her, and continue to flirt with her trought out the chapter. Only then you will unlock the full massage scene.

Review of version 0.11  

                           Story: 5/10       Graphics: 7/10    Characters: 4/10

All right guys, this games is still prety early in its development and indepently if you're looking for a sex game simulator, or a history based visual novel you should still wait a bit, as there is not a lot here.  That being said the few we already have is not bad, and its worth the playtrough.

The character models are overall good, but the proportions, and posing are a bit off.  Most girls arms look to thin and it stands out on some angles. (problems the creator already want to resolve by remaking the prologue and chapter 1 once is finished.) The Facial expression are not bad. Lighting is great, no flaws there. But by far the graphics biggest strengh are the animations, there are fluid, loop well (when they loop), and are not  exclusive to the erotic scenes, also being used in important moments for the story.

The protagonist for now seems realy shallow, he hasnt show interest in anything beside sex, and he literaly states that the hole reason the game is happening is because he wants to get layed. There is nothing wrong with a basic protagonist, as long as he serves only as a self insert for the player. But the fact that he had friends and a live before the story started, shows that he isnt just that, and  can evolve into something  greater.  Kayla's route seem to be a little rushed, she goes from hating the mc for spying on her, to kissing him as thanks for helping her, to letting him feel her boobs to boost her low self steam, all in the span of 2 days. The concepts for her history arent bad, but its happening WAY to quickly. The rest of the cast are overall good, or to early to tell.

At face value this game doesnt seem to be trying to be anything more than a sex fantasy for the player, and thats perfectly fine, but there are hints lurking beneath the surface that suggest a bigger story is ready to unfold in the following chapters.  For now we wait for the next update, and see what it will bring.

Sorry for bad english

                             Story: 7/10       Graphics: 9/10    Characters: 10/10

Guys this shit is IT,  i havent seeing such promesing visual novel in a while. There are only two chapters, and it still manages to show so much potencial. The premice of a broken man trying to put his life back together, after an injured led him down the wrong path, is by itself a deviation of the chosen one/ nice guy syndrome that plagues most visual novels. And the volley aesthetic is also uncommon, which is a plus.

The protagonist isnt just some shallow horny monkey who is after anything that moves, he is a deeply  flaud person who just happens to be around horny romantic interesses. The creator even put obviously bad choices at the start to give us an insight on the way the protagonist is thinking, and some of those choices lead to unique bad endings. which is a nice touch. The girls all have distintive personalitys and looks, and most of them seem to also be dealing with personal struggles, that gives layers to their characters and makes them feel alive. 

Just taking the writing into account, this would already be a good visual novel, but the renders elevate it to a whole new level. The backgrounds are detailed, with great lighting and characters never standing still. There are models not only for the main cast, but for the background characters as well. Those same models contain such intricated texturing for their skin and such a variety of outfits, that really helps imerse the player on that world.

Sorry for bad english.