Story: 7/10 Graphics: 8/10 Characters: 5/10
Well guys, this game's story is interesting and somewhat unique. Although the main character wishing for more in life is a frequently used trope, the modeling environment isn't. This setting seems to show potential for a engaging story about fighting the corrupts in the system to protect those around you.
The overall renders are good, with complex lighting and detailed backgrounds. The character models aren't bad either. They all look distinct, and change appearance depending on the situation. The animations show a noticeable upgrade as the chapters go on, they aren't bad at any point, but the fact that they seem to be evolving is a good omen for the game's future.
The characters are a bit weird. They seem to have perfectly fine backstories, but their "events" just kind of happen, with little build up to it, making the whole thing seem off paced. This pacing issue ends up making the character feel shallower than they really are.
The mini-games where a pleasant surprise, providing a nice optional detour during the playthrough. The multiple languages available are also a nice touch.
For a dev's first game, this is a pretty solid start. Even if it still early in development, it is still worthy to play. I look forward to see how this game will end up.
Sorry for bad english