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Review of version 0.11  

                           Story: 5/10       Graphics: 7/10    Characters: 4/10

All right guys, this games is still prety early in its development and indepently if you're looking for a sex game simulator, or a history based visual novel you should still wait a bit, as there is not a lot here.  That being said the few we already have is not bad, and its worth the playtrough.

The character models are overall good, but the proportions, and posing are a bit off.  Most girls arms look to thin and it stands out on some angles. (problems the creator already want to resolve by remaking the prologue and chapter 1 once is finished.) The Facial expression are not bad. Lighting is great, no flaws there. But by far the graphics biggest strengh are the animations, there are fluid, loop well (when they loop), and are not  exclusive to the erotic scenes, also being used in important moments for the story.

The protagonist for now seems realy shallow, he hasnt show interest in anything beside sex, and he literaly states that the hole reason the game is happening is because he wants to get layed. There is nothing wrong with a basic protagonist, as long as he serves only as a self insert for the player. But the fact that he had friends and a live before the story started, shows that he isnt just that, and  can evolve into something  greater.  Kayla's route seem to be a little rushed, she goes from hating the mc for spying on her, to kissing him as thanks for helping her, to letting him feel her boobs to boost her low self steam, all in the span of 2 days. The concepts for her history arent bad, but its happening WAY to quickly. The rest of the cast are overall good, or to early to tell.

At face value this game doesnt seem to be trying to be anything more than a sex fantasy for the player, and thats perfectly fine, but there are hints lurking beneath the surface that suggest a bigger story is ready to unfold in the following chapters.  For now we wait for the next update, and see what it will bring.

Sorry for bad english

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Thanks for the thoughtful and detailed review!

You made some very fair points, especially considering the current state of the game. The story will definitely start to unfold in 0.13, which I’m now expecting to be 3  to 4  times bigger than 0.12.

Kayla's route will 100% be adjusted. Her current progression is the result of some poor early planning. That’s  one of the many things that will be fixed.

I genuinely can't wait to release 0.13 and the upcoming rework. I believe it’ll bring the game much closer to realizing its full potential.