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l loved the action scenes as well as the suspense throughout the story. A bit confused about the AI's motivation though as well as how each clone seemed to have the memories of the previous clones (I know there was a memory cord, but the 2nd and 3rd time he came back, it seemed that he already knew what happened). The ending also confused me a bit, did a different AI bring him back to life? Or did the evil AI revive again for some reason?

It felt like a glimpse to a much larger story in the best way possible. I loved how Nipparad was running away from becoming a monster like the people she used to work with/for and encounters a different kind of monster in the mutants who were chasing after her.

I also enjoyed Waylorn and how he contrasts Nipparad by facing these kinds of monsters head on instead of playing nice like how Nipparad used to. I also enjoy my westerns and this was scratching that itch very well!

Found this to be very enjoyable and I loved seeing how much each member of the team cared for each other. I do have a question as to what happened in terms of time travel, were there two Jams at the the end? One who just finished time traveling and one who was still preparing to make the three minute travel?  Overall, a very engaging read.

Beautiful story, loved the retelling of sleeping beauty and the relationship between Prince Valeria and Esperanza. Of all the characters though, Talia was my favorite for how tragic she was as a character and I wish there was some way she could have been saved.

Fantastic.

Greatly enjoyed reading this one and I really enjoyed Sally as a character and how she does what she does in order to provide for her family and friends back home! I loved piecing together how the purple crane was what lead to the fall of the kingdom and how only the queen was left.

Would absolutely love to see more of Captain Sally and her adventures!

Greatly enjoyed reading this one and I really enjoyed Sally as a character and how she does what she does in order to provide for her family and friends back home! I loved piecing together how the purple crane was what lead to the fall of the kingdom and how only the queen was left.

Would absolutely love to see more of Captain Sally and her adventures!