l loved the action scenes as well as the suspense throughout the story. A bit confused about the AI's motivation though as well as how each clone seemed to have the memories of the previous clones (I know there was a memory cord, but the 2nd and 3rd time he came back, it seemed that he already knew what happened). The ending also confused me a bit, did a different AI bring him back to life? Or did the evil AI revive again for some reason?
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Thank so much for reading. For some of your questions, John remembered things from his past versions because he had a metal thing in the back of his head that kept his memories and the thing he plugs the memory wire into in the beginning (I know I didn't say this any where in the story but I thought it wasn't super necessary and wanted to keep a mystery vibe). The reason for the AI's motivation is the AI is suppose to be crazy/insane since it was damaged (that why I call the story broken mind) and that's why John comes back at the end because the AI was just making another clone of him for a different reason but messed up with his memories, accidently bring him back. And for the ending I was originally going to just have John die in space but I thought it was boring and not a good conclusion, so I made the open ended one instead. Hope this answers your questions.