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Okay! Thanks for the reply! I do love Alvin, so I'm excited for Game 2! But also super stoked for the rest of MM! I'm looking forward to romancing Gui and Geoffry especially!

I remember reading somewhere about another game going to be developed with Alvin as an LI, will anyone else be included who was introduced here? I must admit I really like Ser Morris' design.

Yeeeees! 5012! 0204 is super handsome, too. So exciting!

That's great to know! I look forward to it. ^_^

Is there going to be a downloadable version at any point? Came here because of Ligia Nunes, creator of Love the Guard, Be the King, recommended it. ^_^ If there is no plan for a downloadable version, that's okay! Just curious and prefer downloads.

I love the new art! So pretty!!! I would LOVE to have LtGbtK on Steam, I'd pay for it on there, too. I was also working on Halloween and didn't dress up, but one of my coworkers dressed up as a pirate! I just painted my nails black (and have very long natural nails, so I have black claws :3 ).

I bought this on Steam and though I haven't finished it, I have to say: Duke is adorable and I love him. 🥰

Just met Osgar and OMG I love him already! The childhood friend (of the real Vampy MC), the growl, the jealousy, the adorable flowers around his face! I had to go back and save before all that so I can go through it whenever, and that's just meeting him! Can't wait for more scenes with him.

So I'm having issues with getting the stats page to scroll enough. I'm not sure how to fix this as I'm super new and can't find the right stuff by googling. I have a (quite long) description at the top, then a few little tidbits reflecting the players choices, then the stats, and the text is cut off and scroll bar barely gets it down low enough to show the "return" button. Any help would be great! But I love the template. I'm slowly figuring things out.

Oooo, this looks awesome! I love Bewitching Sinners, so I'm definitely going to buy the full game of this. I hope you do continue making games, but if you don't, what you've done is awesome. Love all the fun stuff you've done with the BS world and characters!

I hope you do return to this one day to complete it. It is a gorgeous game with amazing art and great characters. I do not have a Twitter/X account, so I couldn't read what happened, but I read other comments on here and got an idea from them. I think what you've made is very unique and special and I am sorry that AI being used by some people is causing you to be accused of your art being AI. I wish people wouldn't throw around baseless accusations and wouldn't attack real artists like you. You obviously put a lot of thought, time, and effort into your art. The designs of the characters are all so beautiful and have so much detail and love put into them. I even noticed a little beauty mark on the King's neck! And Anselm is drop dead gorgeous and adorable and I love his design and everything so much. I hope everything gets better for you soon. I understand if you decide not to finish Where Eternity Sleeps, but I will still hope to see it released one day when you're feeling better and able to go back to it.

I am sometimes really good at romancing characters and sometimes really terrible at it. I like to have a guide just in case I can't get the ending I was intending to go for, so is there an official guide planned at any point? I love Nathan and am intrigued by Chris (haven't finished the game, barely started because I am probably over worrying about choices). But I love it so far! Makes me want to jump into my usual RPGs and play those! XD

I noticed that after the train mission the MC's name in the box keeps showing up as "Oracle" even though they're not even in the suit. This is in Nik's route, ending 1 (is what I'm going for, plus more points toward hero if that affects anything) and continues into at least the next day, if not further.

Awesome! Thank you!

So how does the DLC work, exactly? Do you play it separately or do you copy those files over into the main game folder? And if the second, do you use the main game's application or the DLC's application?

Awesome! Thank you! :D

I play on Steam but came here looking for a bug report feature. Robin's sprite kind of broke for me (his cloak has some slices and missing sections) during his route

SPOILER: 

after losing the second wager

Downloaded the 8.2 version and my PC is now saying that the app is a threat and keeps deleting it so I can't play.

Awww, they're so cute! Though Geoffrey seems to be missing a finger, oh no!

I've got a couple things I noticed. In June's route I got this error (first image). Then I noticed with both Calderon and Damon's routes that there's a consistency issue. I don't know if it is only those two or if it's with all of them. So the issue is that Cal/Damon are above you, but then pull you down beside them on the bed, which would require you being above them. (Second and third images) Edit to add: I'm playing on Steam. I doubt the versions between Itch and Steam are different, but just in case, this is the Steam version.

I'm so excited! I love this game so much.

Awesome!!!

Awww, Cal is so sweet! I love the color of the UI, looks awesome. Super stoked for A6 to release. I hope everything with Steam goes faster and smoother than expected!

I love the dynamic between Azram and the MC. It made me sad and happy at the same time, plus I love the MC's sense of humor! And Azram is gorgeous in both this game and the first. Love him so much!

This is amazing! Played both and both are so short but sweet and I love them. I'm going to have to play through several times, ask Azram all the questions! I am very curious how old he actually is, but it could be said in response to one of your guesses, so I'll see then if so!

I hope this will one day be released. It looks like a lovely game! I'm going to download it.

Super excited to play through the full thing several times! Also, "Ward the Dragon, Love the King" sounds awesome and badass and exciting. I'll definitely play that asap when the first demo/public build comes out (if it's released the same as LtGBtK). Super exited for everything! Love your work.

I love this game so much. It's so good! I'm both excited and sad for the end. I'll have to start all over again, several times.

That one works!

Hello! I've got a strange bug where the game does not fit in the window, even if I have it set to smaller than my screen and in windowed mode. The text goes off the edge. Here is a screenshot. This seems to even be happening on the title screen, as the "Game Version X" doesn't even show fully.

I agree with many others here. Take the time you need. I understand how losing a parent feels and know how hard it hits, though I can't imagine the grief you feel from having two losses so close together. Take care of yourself and do only what you can, don't push yourself to get it done asap. I agree with Lu that I too would rather wait a long time for a good game to be made with love than for it to be rushed and not turn out the way you'd like it. May you find some comfort in our words and no need to be embarrassed about reading things over again and again to remember your reasons why you love being a dev and writing. It isn't true what they say, words can hurt you, but they can also lift you. I hope this year goes better for you than last year. <3

I'm excited to romance the General. He is so sweet in the demo, I adore him already. I wish I had made it to the kickstarter or the late backer thing on backerkit, but oh well, far too late for that! XD I read the kickstarter update on when it may release. I hope Anna is doing well and gets better. All the best wishes for her and the rest of your team!

Yes! October is going to be the best month with an update to LtGBtK and Veilguard! So excited for both!

That is awesome! I love how it looks and also that you're going to try to keep up the old demo. I like being able to go back and compare things. Super stoked for the new demo release, which is actually on my birthday! I love this game and I'm so excited to play through the prologue again.

Corr. = Correction, Sugg. = Suggestion

I did not write down the full sentences.

Before choosing RO

Danny: "Plane ticket? Where are we going?" Corr. "tickets".

"And all the calls, and favors are" Corr. no comma.

Cass: "No, Daniel?" Sugg. no comma (unless he's supposed to pause here).

Dream sequence:

(Micah was bully when I noticed this, but it is likely also in the version where Micah is your ex): "Same school where you ended up being" Corr. add "The" before "same" and lowercase "s".

Option: "You're joking, right!" Corr. change exclamation point to question mark or add question mark before exclamation point (?!)

Cass route:

Cass (platonic friendship): "because it's going to be our first time" Corr. capitalize "because".

Cass (FwB): "doesn't ruin the connection that we laready have" Corr. misspelling of "already".

(not sure if only in Cass FwB route, just the one I noticed it in) "You quickly nods and look away" Corr. "nod".

Cass: "Only rich people do stupid things like naming island after themselves." Corr. "an island" or "islands".

Option: "It's maybe just the thrill." Corr. switch "it's" and "maybe".

Tar route:

(may be in multiple routes, but noticed in Tar's) "After a few minutes, of kissing and your hands romaing over each other's bodies, Tariq" Corr. no comma after "minutes" and misspelling of "roaming".

Tar: "I'm still pump that" Corr. "pumped".

Tar: "if mommy's and daddy's money will ever" Sugg. "mommy and daddy's".

"Believe me, you haven't seen nothing yet" Corr. "anything".

Playing as Tar: "yet worried he might be even more upset with you" Corr./Sugg. add "if you do" at end.

"Never again you'll meet" Corr. "Never again will you meet".

"Tariq's face lights up with a smile as he runs a hand through his hair" Sugg. Tar is wearing a bonnet in the sprite, maybe change the sentence for consistency?

Option: "At least, he's/she's not snoring." Corr. no comma.

Tar: "the universe is rewarding me with some nice time" Sugg. change "some" to "a".

Danny route:

MC: "whole mess of an argument started?" Corr. change question mark to period.

Cass: "Heard that Daniel is going to be your plus one for Micah's Wedding?" Corr. lowercase "W" and change the question mark to a period.

Danny: "I'm even surprised that another rich family decided to marry their child to Micah" Corr. get rid of "even" or move it to between "family" and "decided".

"It's been a long flight and I can use the warm water to relax my sore body." No speaker tag, pretty sure Danny is supposed to be the speaker. Also, suggestion: change "can" to "could really". Sugg. 2. if change to "could really" get rid of "my sore body" or "to relax my sore body"; ie "It's been a long flight and I could really use the warm water to relax."/"It's been a long flight and I could really use the warm water."

Playing as Danny: "you're this close to do something you might regret." Corr. "doing".

Danny: "What would your favorite person would be like?" Corr. get rid of second "would".

Option about bonuses for employees "I's never a bad thing to give back a little." Corr. "It's".

No specific RO/all routes:

Hayden POV: "you know that you've done a considerable damage" Corr. get rid of "a" or add "amount of" after "considerable".

Flashback (talking to Danny?) "but do you mind elaborate on" Corr. "elaborating" or "could you elaborate on".

(don't remember exactly where this was) mc: "I think you should be Careful, Chief Cassidy." Corr. lowercase "careful".

(don't remember exactly where this was, had it under Danny's route) "Here, you're hoping that Daniel" Corr. get rid of "here", capitalize "you're".

"but it doesn't seems like he can hear you" Corr. change to "seem" or "seems like he doesn't (or "can't" instead) hear you".

Therapist thoughts: "You jolt down even more notes" Corr. "jot".

??? (Freddy): "you will notice a section called 'Liability And Equity." Corr. add apostrophe before period.

??? (Freddy): "current Liability came to" Corr. lowercase "L".

Option: "Wow. she's that desperate" Corr. capitalize "she's" (referring to Micah).

Cass FwB, let in:

"claiming your lips into a passionate kiss" Sugg. change "into" to "in".

"and pulls himself up all the while" Corr. add comma after "up".

"Cassidy makes his way down kissing and licking making his way" Sugg. "Cassidy moves (or leave as makes) his way down, kissing and licking, making his way" Sugg. 2. "makes his way down" twice in the sentence is a bit repetitive, maybe get rid of or change one? Perhaps rearrange the sentence a little if you get rid of one?

at Danny's:

"all while awaiting for Daniel." Corr. "waiting" or get rid of "for".

"as your hands grips the edge" Corr. "grip".

"Of course, you're not." Corr. remove comma.

Danny: "stop stealing copies of my keys and show up" Corr. "showing".

Go to talk with Tar: MC: "you doing livestream in your underwear" Corr. "livestreams".

"the echoes of camaraderie of the team gathered at the entrance, still" Corr. no comma.

(don't remember exactly where this was) "as soon as your fingers intertwine, a spark of electricity shot through" Corr. "shoots".

"You spend countless hours with (chosen RO), poring over" Corr. "pouring".

??? (Summer): "You must be (MC) and plus one, right?" Sugg. add "his/her/their" before "plus one".

"and the young maid, Madeline turns to you" Corr. add a comma after "Madeline".

Madeline: "This was Mr. Bennedict" Corr. "This" to "That".

Micah: "How dare you speak to me like that?" Corr. change question mark to period (or exclamation point).

Micah: "from which low-life dating site you plucked him out, but" Corr. add "of" after "out".

"(RO) gets even closer to me, entertwining" Corr. "intertwining" or "entwining".

Tay: "I know that Micah used to be your bully/ex, and maybe those coming days are what we all need to set things straight." Odd sentence, don't quite understand the meaning. Sugg. "I know that Micah used to be your bully/ex, and maybe you're what we need in the coming days to set things straight." or instead of "you're", maybe: "those past days"; "the past is"; "your past is"; "your shared past is"; "your shared history is".

(don't remember exactly where this was) "You raise an eyebrow, curious" Corr. missing period at end.

"by the large balcony that offer panoramic views" Corr. "offers".

"When you wake up, the night has fallen" Sugg. get rid of "the".

"meticulously dusting the stairs railings" Corr. "the stair railings".

Tay thoughts: "you fall back silent trying to ignore (Micah)" Corr. "you fall silent, trying to ignore (Micah)".

"but when you step inside, two pairs of eyes are staring at you" Corr. "a pair of eyes"; "two pairs of eyes" only makes sense with Danny due to their tattoo.

"Summer, who is keeping score, gleefully announces the score." Sugg. clunky and repetitive, change to "Summer gleefully announces the score.".

"It may not be a real vacation, being in the Caribbean" Corr./Sugg. add "but" before "being".

Tay: "Now that the boat is here, so it's time for a different kind of fun." Corr. get rid of either "so", "now that", or just "that".

"He lowers his voice just so Taylor can hear." Corr. switch "so" and "just".

"but you also catch a glimpse" Corr./Sugg. change "a glimpse" to "parts of the conversation" or something similar.

Tay: "Ive learned to manage his moods over time." Corr. add apostrophe to "Ive".

Tay: "We have greenlight to disembark." Corr. add "the" after "have".

Option: "It's the Caribbean. Of course, it's going to be cute." Corr. get rid of comma after "Of course". Sugg. change cute or add other RO's making cute comment so it makes sense for all; only Tar calls it cute.

Tay: "Great. let's go have fun." Corr. capitalize "let's".

Option: "Give me one good reason to forgive you?" Corr. change question mark to period.

Option: "It's just a boat, Micah, Chill." Corr. lowercase "C" or change the comma after "Micah" to a period.

Micah: "You're right I don't." Corr. add comma after "right".

(Male Micah, not said by, just context, talking privately, bully) "especially after all the bullying she put you through".

"Micah takes another deep, meeting your gaze." Corr. add "breath" after "deep".

Sprite/BG/sound issues:

Danny side profile sprite with raise eyebrow missing a lot of his tattoo (unsure if same with female Danny). Have a screenshot with the textbox hidden in case I did not describe it well.

If skip after letting Cass in, BG stays as outside of apartment.

If you skip at the fire station with Cass as FwB, when the camera/scene pans, the BG goes black. Cass' sprite and the text box are still present and visible.

When skipping with Cass, Danny and Hayden, Cass' sprite ends up underneath Danny's.

Humberto's sprite seems to have a filter over it, the one of his hands in his pockets. Colors are muted. Could be the opposite problem if his jacket is supposed to be brown and not orange.

Ringing continues to play when skipping from the conversation with Micah's parent to talking to Tay on the beach.

Should have a night version of inside mansion BG for when you leave the room after RO suggests practicing kissing in the tub, since the BG has sunlight coming through unseen windows and it is dark at that point.

Thanks for the reply! I did realize that after playing through with Tara/Tariq chosen. I don't know why it didn't actually click until then.

Ah, okay! I was worried if I chose it someone else would take that as my character not being interested in them even if they're the one I go for. Makes sense with the stats. I look forward to seeing how they change in the final product! I was going to make myself a little guide because I can be hit or miss with my choices (Yo-Jin-Bo: The Bodyguards... OMG, I could not get Muneshige XP), but I'll be making it after the game's full release, then. ^_^

I really love the writing and the storyline. I've played through almost every different thing so far. Just need to go through each RO with Micah as an ex instead of a bully, and I'll be done with everything until the next chapter releases. ^_^ Thanks for replying again and  for all the hard work put into the game. Wish I had chosen a higher tier on Kickstarter now XD

Sorry, didn't mean to sound rude or anything, I was just curious about that since when said character flirts with you, you can say you're not interested in guys. I thought it was an interesting conversation and wondered if there was one similar with anyone else.

I did have a moment with Tara (/Tariq) looking really upset after not choosing them and then them witnessing Danny leaving my apartment. Does this happen no matter what you say to them before that? Is it affected by if you choose to go talk with them over things to try to mend things with them?

Also, I'm very curious how the romance/friendship meters change. Is it just based on who you choose to take with you? For instance, I didn't notice any changes to Danny's when I was talking with him, no matter what choice I chose. Is it calculated  after the ends of the chapters or is it not really affected until after you chose them and then is affected by the flirt options that will come in later chapters?

Did the survey. I like the questions, they're good and well-rounded. Also, love LtGBtK and can't wait to play TDW in December and see what else you make.