Honestly the edgyness/coolness factor would just increase if he was a badass evil ninja mastermind instead but I would definitely want to self insert myself less because it's lamer than having magic powers. I'm still a sucker for self made powerful main characters even if the methods are dubious. I like to root for hard working characters even if they're evil, while I get annoyed at a lot of good characters that are lazy. This MC broke through thousands of years of genocidical survival trauma to unlock magic, it will never not be cool to me
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I will admit the coolness factor of magic made me not really afraid of the mc's fall to evil or whatever. And there's enough moral greyness to rationalize well.. killing the people that are selling you off for a paycheck. Plus mc having trauma of being burned alive and haunted by bipeds. I was only really afraid he accidentally hurt loken and the party, or innocent kids in the castle. But the soldiers? They deserved it
He's definitely mentally not well enough to wield instakill magic but i'm too hyped for a mc that isn't a fragile weakling to care honestly. Hope he gets both his powers and rage in check because currently he has neither :(
I like the 3 points that make horror, i actually guessed them before reading further lol
I'm honestly not sure. The slower pace and the constant dead do make me feel like i experienced it myself.. some parts get really monotone like the.. 100th checkup with the doc and him repeatadely asking if i'm fine. It's a weirdly enjoyable vn. Maybe cut off the repeating parts but that's it
I do agree i'd rather they continue with the updates instead of entering the rework hell hiatus that usually results in..
Idk if you're right. I thought he planned each route to have a quirk that that you find out. Aiden has a C and his dad is the H. Dallan is B. Tate is an O. And scribbles route is about dealing with the antagonist and for some reason alvy.
Each route then has connected problems.. Aiden with his dad, dallan with how's treated, tate with his.. dad lol
Then there's other plot points sprinkled in i forget where, like that totally straight fker that bangs the nightfallen guy with a funny name.. The woman that bangs nightfallen and does experiments.. Mc's curse to bang random strangers.. Ok maybe it's all sex but funilly enough it all ties to some other plot point lol
I mean, the story is great and it's just starting, i'm wondering what the fuck would a bigger climax of an arc look like. We already have some clues to the happenings.. like the antagonist biding his time until he does something to win back the rights of nightfallen..
I feel people forgot self insert protagonists are a thing after all the recent vns with defined protagonists.. I liked the vn btw, wolf is a bit of an ass but i'm sure we can fix him lol. Just a bit off putting at the start
Not sure where the story is going exactly. The power systems are not very clearly defined so i can just assume realm magic is probably world pinnacle stuff.. Which would imply they need to adventure until they both (or at least the wolf) get strong or rich enough to negotiate with the world's best mage.
It's like something in the middle of the story is missing.. they're just gonna do random jobs? Will the mc train or is he just gonna carry the wolf's bags and look pretty?
Will see next chapter maybe. Just trying to put my thoughts out loud. You don't have to answer any of these to me here btw, i'm not looking for spoilers, I can wait for the new chapters to read it, gl!
(As response to patreon post) - Patreon is probably your safer bet, it's a true and tested method for FVNs. Kickstarters are mostly used to fund copium like.. indie mmos that never get released. 20y old furries won't fund FVNs they will see in 5 years.. maybe. That's for desperate old school gamers and mmorpgs lol.
I think at best you could attempt to do a small kickstarter to secure funds for the first few months of the development.. Setting a reachable goal like 3000$ maybe.. But that would look bad if it fails so why not do a patreon goal instead? If you reach 1500$ on patreon, you'll.. Do something! Like release this year, idk