why is this one exclusive tho
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I'm actually not sure. I read this till 3 am half sleepy, and the lack of clear transitions gave me a surreal experience that was confusing in a good way honestly. And yeah it's mostly resolved after a few clicks for confirmation.
I found it weirder how the king became buddy buddy with him nearly instantly. The mc at least makes sense, he's doing whatever to get back to his world and make his current situation better. His situation is already great, he's friends with the king, guards and the thieves. He has good job prospects too. Just on a bit of parole or how it's called basically
Yea i think most dropped the VN after it got accused of glorifying the Ra word. Later on in the story I think that's kind of hilarious. But then the devs got accused of the P word so it's a case of, even if both turn out false, 99% of people will still ignore the VN.
Sucks cus it's very unique, I don't think any other VN has a revenge story like this one, or a MC that can commit sepuku to notself :P
The plot also seemeed like it just started, with the secret orgs, superhuman abilities etc
Holy fuck i did not expect you to have a new VN ready right away lmao
I guess you're going full writer this time as you hired an artist? Will comment after i read, i don't tend to read VNs during the morning. All i know is that tiger is really good looking..
I do wish there was a way to be more honest about the game without spoiling things. Personally i'm not too big on dating sims, but a nice husbando on the screen does wonders for my attention span.. So just having a romance subplot with that hunk is a huge plus. Still interested in the game, tho i'll feel a bit bad if the mc doesn't get back with him.
I have to note the itch page still lags like hell and while on my PC i barely notice, it does heat up the gpu..
I actually think most fvn writers don't have arrogance problems, but instead an inferiority complex that's shielded by automatic accusations of "hater!". When you're surrounded by yes-men, any criticism or friendly suggestions will seem like hate. That's literally the only suggestion i'd give them. Realize you aren't a master novelist because a few people liked staring at your wolf's tits. I've seen quite a few writers say something like: "what do you know? I'm the one here with a popular vn!. It's like they forgot people can criticize games they play, even if they aren't game developers themselves. The old saying goes: Customer is always right. It doesn't mean that exactly, but it means that you should take the words of customers seriously. Even people who don't know how to criticize will still provide some insight into the story's problems if you know how to understand their reviews. As an example, if half the people reading your story are confused about some plot point and are wrong, it's the fault of the writer for not realizing he explained it poorly, not the fault of the readers. But if only 1% of readers didn't understand, you could say it's the fault of those few readers. This is why writers need to take all cricitism seriously. If they just shrug of those half readers that didn't understand the plot as dumb, they will end with a story nobody understands.
Oh and another comment said vns don't need plot. You might be right but those vns like nekojishi are years old and there weren't many options back them. A fvn with weird taiwanese gods (was it?) was really interesting. These days i think it would flop hard. There's still market for pure SOLs but i think these days you need some gripping plot to really make it popular. And nekojishi actually had plot, so that was a weird example, EA and other dating sims are a better example. Hell i think the market is kinda saturated right now overall, i noticed lots of very good vns completely flop
I have zero clue what any foreshadowing meant so I just ended up confused and just tried to enjoy the slice of life part. And I feel I read the game for days on end. Just felt like too long without figuring anything out. Like wtf are those nightmares, the killer, his headache. Etc
Tbh i picked to go with him cus i wanted to learn about his aura magic and to just check out the worst choice possible (the one game warned me NOT to take) but it was honestly kinda cute lol. But i'd rather continue the main game plot and go to the academy
I wish you actually kept us updated here even if it's a short changelog like "update 1.25, added MR skittles day 5"
Also I read in a comment that episodes are important to story, maybe make that more easily known, i'm like a year waiting for an actual update and then i find out these episodes are actual updates
That part at the start confused me a lot. I guess the weird dog clerk is some demon that can setup his own domain and the mc entered that? Also how did he make it so his phone app shows the hind is on the other side of the city when it's right there? Maybe the domain is in another location which is why the directions were wrong? Because when the mc exits the store, he's teleported to the original spot.
Or maybe i'm overthinking and he just has magic that can control the phone screen, or it was some other restaurant named the same.
Also ross is way different than that flashback made me think lol