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I think it's simple, the better you are as a writer, the more lore you can dump on readers in the same amount of text without boring them. Opposite is true too. My fav novel that has worldwide following is accused of loredumps too so it's not easy. Generally you gotta make it interesting and drip feed it. Yes we also play furry vns to look at cute husbandos


Personally i think i lost interest when the mc introduced his power of reality warping by using it in 20 min long parkour sequence or something. I was both bored with how long the thing lasted and bummed out because the power seemed too op, so it reminded me of those "reincarnated in another world with my 1 shot kill smartphone" anime lol


That said i was considering giving it another go because people gave it high praises

I appreciate your thoughts! I think lore and exposition ultimately boils down to reader tolerance, but as you say there are ways of making it more palatable.

I’m obviously biased, but I certainty encourage you to keep going as there are narrative constraints placed on Ravy’s ability in part to handle that concern.

Ok I pushed through the part I disliked and it was decent. I'd say characters are a strong part of the vn, and the lore is cool but the combination of unique lore, every 5th word being a made up word I need to memorize like 'kaike' and 'kal' (which i think meant shit or god?), and every second character being a master manipulator playing 5d chess plus our mc being an unreliable narrator with his own memories being fragmented.. leads to a bit of a confusing experience

Interested where the plot will go, I see the mc's ability might be a way to become what they call talespinners which sounded like some strong demigods in this universe, which is kinda cool

I’m gratified you gave it a shot! Thanks for the feedback.