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~Mother knows best~

You're very good at writing suspense. I was clenching my teeth throughout the prologue. Can't wait for more and good luck with your studies!

Man, every time Pepé Le Pew shows up I get worryingly giddy! I think it's really cool how the MC can have a crush on the monochrome man, because me too bestie.

Everyone is so cute in this game, and it makes me emotional. I nearly cried when I saw Ren. The two leads are fantastic, I want to put them both in my pocket and protect them from this cruel world.

I can already tell that the full game is going to rip my soul out. I mean, how many times can you have your heart won and broken by a dancing, dark-eyed mess? T_T

There isn't much that I can say that hasn't already been expressed by everyone in the comments. Reading this felt like I went on a grand adventure. I don't mean to make comparisons to a game like Mass Effect, because really your story is unique, but it's more so the feeling of an established universe. Also, Tsering is evil Garrus and I can't unsee that. It does not stop me from wanting to romance him, I am simultaneously infatuated and full of rage.

All of the characters in the story are very fleshed out you can't help but care about them all. I love all of the options, not just the appearance for the main character, but the various dialogue options, especially the witty ones. 'Kind of a chaotic mess' is my favourite main character flavour. 

It's a genuine good time and my only criticism is that it ended. Can't wait for the completion of this story. And the fact that you want to release TWO books makes me giddy. Looking forward to it!

Dark. Vampire. Romance. I love all of those words separately. Put them together and - BOOM - perfection.

Your writing is so beautiful. The world of this story is also very unique. My favourite part of your stories are the characters. I love them all, even in the early stages. It's clear to see that you are passionate about what you do, and I hope you continue to create these amazing stories. You've certainly inspired me to pick up writing again, even if it's just for me. Thank you!

The way I gasped!

Hiya.

I'm really enjoying the new update and I'm very intrigued by the mystery of our player character.

I don't know if it's the end of the update, but I got to the page regarding the rumours surrounding the soul trial and there wasn't a button to continue. Not sure if it's by design but I'll report it anyways in case it helps out :D
I continued my save from the previous update so maybe it messed around with things like you warned it could.

Either way, good work on the world building so far!

You're doing a wonderful job with the story and characters! I am a fan of your writing for sure. I am patiently looking forward to more :3

She's so over the top, I love her! She kind of reminds me of Mrs Bennet from Pride and Prejudice XD

Uhm I love it?? The humour is so incredible, every sentence had me giggling. I enjoy the scenarios Sherlock ends up in. All the characters are fleshed out and not 'perfect'. They are endearing and so very flawed (looking at you Lestrade, you meanie).

Here are some of my favourite lines (paraphrased):

Are those my biscuits...?

A lock of Watson's hair, he doesn't know...

There will be no pricking!

Do not tell me - or I will raise your rent.

Do you know the ways of men?

The currently build leaves off with a lot of drama potential. I can't wait for more!

Truthfully, all the romance options are tempting. I like making Merikh blush like a little schoolgirl hehe. And I have a feeling that Heka is not as innocent as he tries to come across ¬¬. And I agree that Aretas makes a compelling picture of self-control  ~oh my~.
I am just interested in all the characters, even the non-romancable ones. I will be waiting for more as well!

This is so good! I read the demo on and off throughout my day and I have experienced the full spectrum of human emotion three times. I was also happy each time a new chapter rolled around and I didn't want it to end. The demo has a generous amount of content. Definitely looking forward to more!

Also... Sutek... Somehow murderous energy does not deter me :^o Like a uh moth to a uh mangy dog :D

The story is very interesting so far, I like all the customisation options. I chose the orphan background and I'm already protective of Spencer.

The background options made me think of Mass Effect, which I love. I'm looking forward to rest of the story!

Also, I can't wait to meet Wilhelmina (Mina) because she is my namesake XD (luckily, I read the description before deciding on my character's name!)

Although now I am wondering if your naming system would have let me have that name. It would make for a funny coincidence later on.

TLDR: I love your story, please continue at your own pace!

Let me start off by saying that I am sorry to hear about your health struggles and I hope your recovery goes well. Please don´t rush getting better, your wellbeing is paramount.

I just want to add that I love this story and all of the characters that I´ve met so far. The Main Character´s background is very interesting, and I can see multiple personalities possibly forming from that background. Your writing is beautiful and concise, I could seriously read a whole book series in one night if it was done this expertly!

I´ll definitely be reading any and all future updates. Take care of yourself! 

This story has really captivated me. 

Your writing is absolutely beautiful without being overly descriptive (I get easily frustrated when I have to read a page long description about the environment XD). The setting and rules of this world were also easily digested. It feels very natural, unlike some stories I've read where I have to read an encyclopedia article before I can move on with the story.

The whole time I was reading I was so tensed up! You've truly managed to create a foreboding atmosphere and extremely interesting characters. I love them all, also I am suspicious of every single person I come across :(. I don't know why but that fork-tongue demon slithered his way into my heart, I hate him (I love him).

All the choices you can make in the game also feel impactful, even if they tie back into the main story. It makes each playthrough feel different. I have checked out your other games too and they all definitely feel unique to your brand, even if they deal with different subjects. Anyways, sorry for rambling. I just want to say that I'll happily read/play anything you create because it's just that good! 

The gothic style of this particular story is perfect for me which is why it's my favourite. I am eagerly looking forward to whenever you are done with it. I'll be more than happy to pay for this quality product. Thank you PDRRook!