There isn't much that I can say that hasn't already been expressed by everyone in the comments. Reading this felt like I went on a grand adventure. I don't mean to make comparisons to a game like Mass Effect, because really your story is unique, but it's more so the feeling of an established universe. Also, Tsering is evil Garrus and I can't unsee that. It does not stop me from wanting to romance him, I am simultaneously infatuated and full of rage.
All of the characters in the story are very fleshed out you can't help but care about them all. I love all of the options, not just the appearance for the main character, but the various dialogue options, especially the witty ones. 'Kind of a chaotic mess' is my favourite main character flavour.
It's a genuine good time and my only criticism is that it ended. Can't wait for the completion of this story. And the fact that you want to release TWO books makes me giddy. Looking forward to it!