This is really good. I especially enjoyed how the personality choice influences some dialogue and felt like I could make a character I was happy with while letting the story drive the rest. A lot of customisation options, which is always nice to see. I played through all of the branching sections towards the end, and I was surprised at how different they all were! So far the characters are all intriguing and give off very different vibes and I'm very curious on what's going to happen next.
I also don't see anything wrong with your writing, and although I'm not an English Lit professor, I can safely say that there is a nice mix between descriptive prose and flowing action :)
Thank you so much for taking the time to write this. I'm always open to constructive criticism because that's how you grow in all things. However, when someone essentially says; "Hey, just stopped by to say you're writing sucks and everyone's lying to you."
It's like damn, well what am I supposed to do with that useless piece of information? It's not constructive in the least and essentially just a personal opinion.
But it still installs some doubt, since then I've been scrutinising my work somewhat. Wondering if others share that same opinion and just won't come out and say it. Luckily I'm made of tougher skin than that to really let things like this affect me too deeply. It's still nice and incredibly appreciated when my true supporters take the time to show some love.
Thank you again, and I hope you have a wonderful day because you've certainly made mine 🩷💗❤️