Well that was a fun one. Very lighthearted, in a deadly way. I liked the bit about the astronomer best, that was a very unceremonious and fairy-tale way to go.
I agree with the others, the use of the cycle of violence as the infinite loop is a good take on the theme. I also like how you focused on the Skirmish side of things rather than the larger, galactic factions!
I like how, when fighting the skeletons, Kriegvar clearly jumps from Grimdark Future to Fantasy. It's interesting to see things from what seems to be a Demon grunt instead of some powerful lord.
I enjoyed the feel here, like the city is on a different wavelength than the author, so it's inhabitants can keep it tidy without being visibly present. I also like how they're kind of friendly to the author, even if it's a bit sinister; I imagine the different author of the last entry will not receive such a welcome!
The references to specific units and gear makes this feel like a great dramatization of one, maybe two turns in a battle report! I also like how the Mural adds some texture and sense of history with just a couple lines. It's never just a battlefield - it's someone's home, too.
Thanks for the support, I hope we see him too! I wanted to give the feeling that this was actual lore within a larger setting - so of course, it had to establish a special character you'd want to put on the table, and "character affected by magic/tech from another faction" is a pretty common trope in tabletop wargames to tie the setting together or let people put a little more Faction B into Faction A.
