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Cute sound effects and lovely visuals!

Got all the endings! Quite enjoyed them.  Some of those endings, especially #8, sent shivers down my spine – loved it!

(P.S. Wish it had autoforward, odd that the slider's there in settings but there doesn't seem to be a way to turn it on.)

That was a nice short story. Spent ~40 mins with it. I enjoyed the art and the branches (especially the first dead-end ones with De Reemus lying on the ground). Especially loved the random drops of  French alongside English.

Some basic UI issues made this a bit harder to play for me: namely the missing AutoPlay and FullScreen buttons (have to squint to play in-browser). Having a Mac Build would've been nice.

Will send a doc with screenshotted feedback and thoughts via instagram messages. :)

Cute and Random. That bad joke was bad. I liked it 🙂

Nice :). I liked the character designs, it was cool to see how they changed as they grew up. I play most VNs with AutoAdvance, so I wish there was that option (instead of a Skip button).

It would've been cool to have some Spanish VO (will send you an email with some thoughts, along with some minor additional feedback).

Nice and Short. Refreshing to see a friendly conversation between a 🐶 + 🐸.

I didn't realize the Characters were made with ChatGPT – was it the Character Images or Character Dialogues that were generated with ChatGPT?

Regardless, the selection for the music was great, and I really liked the character designs. Wish there would've been a downloadable (mac) build.

No worries. There's a lot of good unfinished VNs, and good short VNs on itch. Just a headsup that some of us are on trackpads :)

Awesome. Got it. Will send an email shortly. (You can edit/delete your reply if you don't want your email exposed online.)

Absolutely beautiful <3 Thank you for making this.

Short, but not bad. Interesting to see a game about Macau. Odd to see it branch out so significantly.

Do you have a twitter/bsky/mastodon/tumblr/email/… where I could DM you? Wanted to potentially share my help, or some tips if you wanted, for future Visual Novels.

Can't get past the alarm clock, too fast.

Love it! Absolutely haunting, spent 3.5 hrs exploring. Adored the puzzles and the visuals for the rooms as well!

hey y'all. I enjoyed this quick 15-20 min demo. I liked the uniqueness of the character designs :). That real-time job-app mini-game was certainly stressful! Also found some minor text issues.

Will send over an email with screenshotted feedback.

I think actually something just got unlocked. Love your VNs peb. Pinging you on mastodon :P. – hd

Literally Lol'd so many times through this; generic friend-kun, everyday convo with tree-chan, tree-chan breaking the 4th wall, harada-sensei.   😂

Wow. That was gripping. So well-written, with brilliant background music and sound effects! The 2-3 character images were great as well, and were more than enough to imagine the characters.

Not bad Ice. I enjoyed the music and some of the characters. Nathan's certainly fun.

I loved whenever Filipino/Tagalog showed up, and wished there were images of the food: Tinola, Adobo, Tofu, etc.

Please accept this feedback as a desire to help the VN: As a subvocalizer, I personally found the VN a bit verbose (e.g. flashbacks within flashbacks, long descriptions of screen visuals and playing audio). At times, it felt more suitable as a novel. At my usual reading speed, this would've taken me 9 hours. Also would've loved more choices even if they went nowhere (like the futility of trying to get the bus driver to stop). That's just me though.

I can see this becoming a cool VN, especially with the music (with longer cross-fades perhaps).

I'll email over a full list of my notes with screenshots and thoughts.

– HD

So cute and well written! 

Instantly fell in love with the music when I opened the game! 

Also love the accessibility considerations :)

– Hando

Thank you for the lovely comment! I really hope you and he enjoys it. 💛

Loved this Liam!

Playtime: 30-60 mins (I spent 60mins, but I was trying to catch bugs)

Best Parts:

1. Culture Notes

2. Cinematography, Noir Style

3. Right amount of "complicated" (I didn't find this demo "needlessly complicated" at all, at least for this build).

(I think I'll also enjoy the Money and Travel systems in future chapters.)

Minor Bugs:

1. Biggest issue for me was the minor misspelling of "小姐" as "siu jei" in the game - as neither Jyutping (siu² ze²) nor Yale (síu jé) spellings were used.

2. Some non-mainstream routes are mismatched, texts misaligned, and RenPy standards overwritten, But nothing major.

I'll send you a full list of feedback with screenshots via your BSky/somehow later today/tomrrow. I also have some longer thoughts re: VA that I wanted to share with you.

Thank you for the kind words Willowweevil! 💛

Hi WillowWeEvil! Thanks for asking. Unfortunately only paypal atm, it'll be a while before I'm able to set up 'pay with card'. In the meantime I'd love to send you a gift if you leave an email or a way to DM you here: https://forms.gle/QfPtYkubJyPpMsTP7 . Cheers!

Thank you Aliccja! That would be lovely, unfortunately this game is on hold as I focus on some better game engines. I would love to reach out about future games though! If you have any Youtube play-throughs/dubs, I'd love to follow you! 💛

Thank you Bonsaipropaganda!

Thank you so much for the kind words and the really awesome feedback Ulfben! 

Update: I've updated the game taking most of these points into account, and will keep them in mind in future games! Much appreciated! ✨💖✨

This music pack is lovely! 🧘 Thank you for creating these. 😍

I used them in this language immersion game: https://glossquest.itch.io/gloss-quest-foreign-island.

If you wanted to check out the game, just let me know at flours-speckle-0u@icloud.com and I'll generate a free key for you! 😁

That was cool, and quite haunting! 🚪

Had the same issue. That terminal command you provided worked for me. :)

Thanks so much Gyvr! And thanks for Mythril2D, really helps a lot! 😁

Wow, thank you very much for the support Filipe! 💖

I wasn't entirely sure if people would like this old demo. You've inspired me to revisit making games with more complex grammar. I'll keep you posted!

This was fun! I enjoyed the puzzles, though the dialogue felt a bit much and I got stuck on the last puzzle for a while - but it was really well done. Enjoyed Kevin's voice acting and the graphics.

Woot! Got up to Wave 10, Score 570.

This was a really fun and smart idea! Thanks for making it!

This is great feedback! I'll definitely take it into account. Thank you very much 🙇‍♂️

Wow! This was unbelievably cute. 

Seriously y'all. Play until you score 30!