Not bad Ice. I enjoyed the music and some of the characters. Nathan's certainly fun.
I loved whenever Filipino/Tagalog showed up, and wished there were images of the food: Tinola, Adobo, Tofu, etc.
Please accept this feedback as a desire to help the VN: As a subvocalizer, I personally found the VN a bit verbose (e.g. flashbacks within flashbacks, long descriptions of screen visuals and playing audio). At times, it felt more suitable as a novel. At my usual reading speed, this would've taken me 9 hours. Also would've loved more choices even if they went nowhere (like the futility of trying to get the bus driver to stop). That's just me though.
I can see this becoming a cool VN, especially with the music (with longer cross-fades perhaps).
I'll email over a full list of my notes with screenshots and thoughts.
– HD