As much as id prefer not to be killed by some players... Poor Lance
Had to be enslaved just at time when he started to realize his mistakes (at least the way i see it)
Six months alone with Silver sounds wonderful though, i love this guy x3
Oooh...
I love the jokes ("why are they so massive", omygod xD), i love these characters and i love how the story manages me to get all emotional
Might be spoilers ahead
I feel VERY... strange about second chapters ending. Not only wasnt i given any choise about confession but it also conflicted wth my previous choices (flirting with certain tiger for example (I just hope Kitoa will get his own huge part, i love him x3), or MC's desire to tell the truth about himself). Not to mention that... lets say, Ross' "friendly behaviour" felt REALLY out of character (i honestly did hit "attack" button at first). Sure, if you wont hit him, it would be explained, but i honestly thought he was posessed or something... All in all, way too creepy
The third chapter... omg, it was awesome, even though i got the first ending at first ><
Nice Taylor twist, i really was shocked, and loved his "true" behaviour. Well, i like these "drop the act" moments in general xD
Also, have to say, i was reading all at once and ive felt a lot of impovement in writing and art thoughout the process, it was really cool to see, youre doing an amazing job here! Hope to read it further x33
SPOILER ALERT
Strangely, it was shorter that i thought but i guess ive read two builds in a row before
First of all, this update has an awesome representation of anger issues and, i guess, severe post-traumatic stuff, i loved every episode of it. It really FEELS like a problem that Alex will need to confront sooner or later and i indeed see that he struggles with his rage for control, its really cool
But the end of he day is just... i dont know, it was something like this:
Alex: I NEED answers! You, algorithm, you wanna talk the extinction of my race out?
Loken and Byte: the hell are you doing, dont break our trust please
Alex: ugh, i strived the knowledge and it bit me in the ass
Also Alex: oooof, i cant sleep, why dont i fuck around with this exact knowledge some more? What could possibly go wrong?
I mean, sure, he is NOT stable now, with these outbursts and stuff, but even with the theory about Byte it looks like surprizingly dumb move
This might change in future updates but i think there will be a LOT to talk about in the morning...
Not to offend anyone, of course, i still love this vn >~>