This is a good start, I liked that you tried something new, different mechanics but a lot of similarities. There’s something here to work with
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You really need to fix this page, without an anti-virus I wouldn’t trust this file at all haha. Also put instructions, I had no idea what I was getting into.
But it’s a nice start! First 3d game? Leaderboards and everything are good. Focus on making the game juicy, definitely add music and the like: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fy0aCDmgnxg
The difficulty! I’m not dying like crazy haha. This was fun, I liked the use of the theme and the exposition at the end. I was like, what’s the logic to this puzzle, and then figured it out. It wasn’t immediately clear, but it’s contained so not an issue.
I like simple graphics, it looks clean. Maybe use a different font and UI for presentation. Background music was nice, maybe some sound effects could be added. But the time frame was super short, it’s no biggie.
Good work!
Hey! Congrats on submitting your game! It’ll help if you could do the following things:
- Add a cover image, preferable a gif but maybe a screenshot
- Add a description of the game and instructions on how to play it
- Add a web build if possible, Android alone isn’t the most accessible platform on itch.io
Reach out to me on Discord if you need some help! https://discord.gg/axGtfrk
Hello everyone! Good job on all the participants, those who were able to submit and those who couldn’t. Making a game isn’t easy and it’s pretty awesome to see what came out of the jam.
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Hola! ¿Puedes subir tu videojuego para la web, o lo sube como un archivo .zip en lugar de .rar? Si haces, mas gente lo puede jugar.
https://itch.io/t/286487/cmo-subir-los-juegos-gua-y-respuesta-a-preguntas
Hola! ¿Puedes subir tu videojuego para la web, o lo sube como un archivo .zip en lugar de .rar? Si haces, mas gente lo puede jugar.
https://itch.io/t/286487/cmo-subir-los-juegos-gua-y-respuesta-a-preguntas
Hey, thanks for submitting! A couple of things - is this game completely new and created in the game jam period? There’s no issue with a game being submitted to multiple jams. But did you create this game during the game jam period?
Also, for this submission to be valid, it needs to be completely free i.e. no donations allowed.
Sorry for the late notice, please clarify as soon as possible or we would disqualify this submission.
Power of friendship lol. This was interesting, I’m glad I stumbled upon it! 3D is certainly hard than 2D to get to a polished state in a short time, I like the models a lot but I understand why concessions were made for the environment. There’s a good bit of dialogue to get through before playing but it’s quite funny. Good entry!
With Godot, leaderboards are easy with Godot and SilentWolf. Truly makes things easier!
Controls sucked for me because I don’t have a mouse. Life has been very sad on Windows without one lol. No fault of your own of course. Despite that setback, I enjoyed this game! My guess is that the game was a play on “making people whole”. Was that right? I think that’s how the theme is used, but let me know if I’m overthinking it.
Won’t lie, when I first opened a door that wasn’t empty and Mateo popped out when I turned, I scream f@$% in my head lol. Wasn’t expecting that haha. This was cool. I don’t play much VNs but I like a good story. The story threads are understandably short, but that’s fine for a game jam. I read an earlier comment to know when it ended. Good stuff!
I’m finally getting a chance to test the game, but I can’t install it with the desktop client
I think the issue is that the zip file contains a folder, which contains the .exe files. It should be that the zip file contains the exe files - no intermediary folders. I think. You can ask the other participants who have installable Windows builds to be sure. Being able to install via the desktop client would likely get your game more plays!
I died at the first level and was super confused. Turns out it was evil bush hahahahaha. Yea, if that’s more visible then great. Otherwise, I loved it. A bit morbid collecting body parts lol. But really cool take on it, I like getting health when I piece her together. The jumps felt short when I first tried to avoid the evil bush (that’s the official name now) but after a couple of tries I got accustomed to it. Difficulty ramps up but things never felt too unfair. I rather not start over if I die, but the timeframe is small so I’m not going to be too picky about it. Lots of time after to improve if you want!
Great entry, had lots of fun!
There’s a lot to like here. The cutscene was awesome lol. I wish I could dictate when the text changes, I had to be on my toes to read it, but that was a great start to a great game. I loved the visuals and the audio, and I love platformers generally lol. This was nicely put together, the level felt just the right size too. I wasn’t a complete fan of the controls for double jumping, and I felt as if moves could have been unlocked at different parts. That said, how you handled the tutorials were excellent.
Really, really impressed.
At first I was like, when am I getting my new parts? Lol. I don’t have a mouse, so playing on the trackpad was less fun than I think imagined. Also, no middle button for me :-(. It’s a simple game loop that most people can jump in and have fun, the arcade vibe.
I had a few issues with it. The sfx is pretty repetitive, did you vary the pitch? I think that’ll help me feel like I’m not hearing the same thing over and over again. The game could use some transitions between waves. As soon as you start a wave there’s an onslaught of bullets raining down on you. I was like “what the hell?” the first time I tried it lol. After I finish a wave, maybe small screen transition and a countdown would help. It’s way too immediate for a new wave.
But I like the simple fun, and use of the theme! Keep it up!