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A rare gem with a compelling narrative.BUT lewd scene is overly sketchy.
但对于我来说最重要的是享受和女孩们相遇、相熟、相知相守这个过程，很喜欢可以查看人物传记这个设定，游戏的中文翻译也很完美，作者加油！

Start with the conclusion.As a new director, i must say your production quality and pace are undoubtedly above average. However, you need to declare the game's special tags before it officially starts, please,rather than showing them in a line of fine print on the webpage.Do you know how desperate I felt halfway through playing?I don't hate big c**k woman too much,it's mildly bizarre to me.But i still felt your betrayal,Vic's face reminded me of someone in real life.Even though I've forgotten her name, seeing that somewhat a little familiar face still makes me want to keep playing.
Alright, enough chit-chat. Let's briefly discuss the gameplay experience:
First, the MC's design feels a bit rough around the edges—hopefully it can be made more handsome.
Second, the transitions during gameplay progression feel somewhat abrupt.The transitional segments in the story are weak.For example,you can use the MC's inner monologue to signal to players that this event is about to conclude, ensuring it doesn't feel abrupt.And you should know a good story definitely has foreshadowing.It will also enhance the game's immersive experience.
Lastly, I'd love to see more music and sound effects added. I know sound design is a HUGE undertaking, but even adding some commonplace effects would help.As for the music, your taste is quite good, but it feels a bit sparse—there's simply not enough to listen to. Regarding the models, the lighting sometimes looks off—a bit weird at times. Keep learning and improving, babe!

神作预定

建模、故事、表现手法和游戏沉浸感都相当不错，和Lua初遇的那段笑死我了，难度作者真的是个天才？