Start with the conclusion.As a new director, i must say your production quality and pace are undoubtedly above average. However, you need to declare the game's special tags before it officially starts, please,rather than showing them in a line of fine print on the webpage.Do you know how desperate I felt halfway through playing?I don't hate big c**k woman too much,it's mildly bizarre to me.But i still felt your betrayal,Vic's face reminded me of someone in real life.Even though I've forgotten her name, seeing that somewhat a little familiar face still makes me want to keep playing.
Alright, enough chit-chat. Let's briefly discuss the gameplay experience:
First, the MC's design feels a bit rough around the edges—hopefully it can be made more handsome.
Second, the transitions during gameplay progression feel somewhat abrupt.The transitional segments in the story are weak.For example,you can use the MC's inner monologue to signal to players that this event is about to conclude, ensuring it doesn't feel abrupt.And you should know a good story definitely has foreshadowing.It will also enhance the game's immersive experience.
Lastly, I'd love to see more music and sound effects added. I know sound design is a HUGE undertaking, but even adding some commonplace effects would help.As for the music, your taste is quite good, but it feels a bit sparse—there's simply not enough to listen to. Regarding the models, the lighting sometimes looks off—a bit weird at times. Keep learning and improving, babe!
Thank you for the feedback! Your timing is actually perfect, because right now, before the next release, I’m working on spicing up the music and SFX, and also balancing the volume levels throughout the game since there are some issues. I’m also reviewing the transitions between scenes.
Handling these things is a bit tricky for me, because, to be honest, this is already the third time I’ve gone through the entire game with these aspects in mind. Every time I play through, I find something new to improve, and there’s still definitely room for growth in this area.
A few people have also commented on the protagonist’s appearance, which I find a bit funny. I guess I’m just not very good at judging guys, so I won’t argue 😄.
Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts!