Your choices never really felt too meaningful, but your prose is good and the storytelling felt like it might belong in a novel. It did suffer a bit for the lack of formatting though.
Hey, thanks for playing! :) We definitely wanted to leave the player feeling like there were more answers than questions. It was tricky trying to ensure that didn't leave things feeling unsatisfying, so no doubt there's room for improvement!
Hey, thank you for the comment. That's quite high praise. We're definitely proud of it, but would have liked more time to iron out the kinks and refine the theme implementation. I'm glad you liked it.
You're clearly pretty familiar with Arcweave, or at least with interactive fiction. You've integrated those mechanics well when exploring the house in particular. It definitely felt like a typical interactive story. The writing shows loads of promise, I think. Your MC felt like a person I might know in real life, with some nice observations/mannerisms. Nice one :) One of the better submissions I've read so far.
I quite like the pairing of the story with the art style. There's a nice introspective feel to the story. The writing and storytelling are a bit... heavy handed? There's definitely some room for your voice to sound a bit more natural, but it's a really good effort, well done! :)
