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Why wound I explain it again, just do you can ignore it again? Fuck you, you disingenuous cuck.

Dude. Just shut the fuck up. You're completely delusional and retarded.

Whether that was NTR is not up to the author to decide. Words have meanings. You don't just get to redefine shit to gaslight people about what you objectively did.

Heck, even you admit you thought she was a love interest - until she got gangraped and killed, and now you have to rationalize it because you can't face the fact that you got NTR'd. You're like a beaten wife telling people "you don't know him, it was my fault".

You're so pathetic it's not even funny. Just disgusting.

Dude, the only soyboy here is you. Simping for NTR content and an author that lied about it. 

A relationship in the making can obviously fall under the definition. It not having fully developed at that point is irrelevant.

Again: If you really think the players had zero interest in her as a LI or that the author wasn't deliberately making her appear like one, you're completely delusional.

How about you go back to sucking your wife's boyfriend off instead of trying to gaslight people with semantics? You're not convincing me, or anyone on this site. Most people here have a broader definition of NTR than I do.

Imagine being so bad at thinking that you ask AI, the only thing that's actually worse at thinking than you...

If you really think the players had zero interest in her as a LI or that the author wasn't deliberately making her appear like one, you're completely delusional.

"In China, love is a heavy word" 

Well, the story doesn't play in China, so you either get used to it or get out.

Your arguments aren't going anywhere because they are lies intended to skirt around undeniable facts, and they are so obvious only the most retarded people might even consider believing them.

This is a harem AVN. If you think an attractive single woman the MC gets friendly with isn't a love interest, you know neither the genre nor its audience. Heck, even married or related women aren't safe.

This argument will "go somewhere" the very second you overcome your denial and face reality.

She was stolen, so it is NTR. Author said there was no NTR. That's the facts, cuck. 

You, or rather the MC, is made aware of the fact she was raped. That's enough for the definition to apply. Obviously NTR can include nonconsensual acts. Stop trying to distract with technicalities, especially when you don't understand those technicalities. 

All you're doing is cementing your position as a cuck by defending the guy who cucked you.

Well, duh. Winter depression tends to happen in winter. Otherwise we'd call it summer depression. ^^

Try to catch more sunlight, or get one of those daylight therapy lamps. Don't forget to air out the room either, even if it's cold. Shock ventilation works best.

Best of luck getting out of that slump.

Look up what netorare means, noob. It doesn't matter if you witness it. What matters is that she was stolen away and you know it.

Silly cuck can't tell cuckolding from netorare and thinks he's cultured...

"Technically speaking" is just an euphemism for lying.

It is canon that she was gangraped and murdered. End of story.

When the author says there's no NTR, there has to be no NTR. If there is NTR, he can't claim there isn't. Basta. Now fuck off, trollface.

Fucking hell.

You can't have those thugs gangrape and murder the girl you got friendly with and then act like this has no NTR.

That was a lie, btw. It fucking does. 

What else would you call a bunch of thugs gangraping and killing Eira?

I'm replaying it in full anyway, whether the saves work or not.

There's so much detail you can forget in just a month or two...

The game seems fine so far. Two minor criticisms: 

1. It would be nice to know which actions advance time beforehand. 

2. These arrows are way too close to the skip time button.

Yeah, one. And as you said, it sucks. Of course, there are mods and such, but eh, many are uncanny at best. And the decent looking ones are often very samey.

Not ripping on the game by the way, that was just a low-caffeine rant about HS in general. 

Yes, honey select was the name. And it is notorious for having no male models. 

No, that's not a Japanese male model. Even Japanese men have a jawline that differs from women, and a small, but clearly male body shape. And how the F did you think THAT is the japanese beauty standard for men? Do you not have eyes?

It's very clearly a female model. You can often even see remnants of breasts on many models, or weirdly shaped shoulders that you get when you try to make a female model look masculine. The latter is visible in one of the sample images.

I wish this thing everyone uses had proper male models. Nearly every MC, sidekick or rival looks like a trans man, which they technically are because it's a (insufficiently) modified female model. 

Good call. I suffered through over an hour of Mega throwing errors yesterday, and that's never fun.

Nice, I guess I've got an evening planned out now. 

Maybe he should have let Elastomer do it instead? ^_^

Joke aside, this is why proofreading and spellchecking are different things. A proofreader always needs to be aware of the context to spot errors that go beyond mere spelling. 

Grow up. Learn to read. And don't necropost on shit from over a year ago.

Hey, thanks for the chapter.

That said, this texbox needs splitting.

That's probably the shortest, most basic and reasonable blacklist I've seen in a while. Anyone worried about this being too vanilla must be unaware of the many possibilities that lie between vanilla and the items on this list.

As an aside, the list seems agnostic to the existence of many other fetishes that are even worse. Maybe it's a good thing you didn't know or think of those. Not going to go into detail, but there's some sick stuff on the internet that you absolutely don't want to stumble onto, ever.

Well, that sounds like a lot of stupid things are happening. Yes, I'm very observant. ^^

It's times like these where a dev pays the price for using a premade engine. Wish you the best of luck and hope it works out.

It's not "inspired" to copy the story, dialogue and appearance almost entirely. That's called plagiarism.

I just stumbled over a webtoon called "Rooftop Sex King". It's basically the same story with better aesthethics, minus animations.

No idea which one is the ripoff though, or if the creators are related. 

Forced allcaps? Sigh...🙄

Anyway, here's a little feedback:

There's no point in panning or tilting the camera around unless you have a really long video loop. Short fast panning in particular only makes it harder to see what is going on. That's made worse if you cut out parts of the action. If you have to pick between the perfect angle or panning around, always pick the angle. I'd be reworking the shower scene. 

The alley scene is very dark. I guess you're coding this in a dark room where even the slightest contrast stands out, because I had to turn the lights off and max the brightness to see properly. There are a number of ways to make a scene look dark without actually making it darker, like using a bluish light source or adjusting contrast and color levels. Anyway, try checking your renders in daylight. 

The second part of the alley scene has a severe mismatch between movement speed and framerate. It doesn't look fast or forcefull, but rather unnatural and choppy. You don't have to make a movement fast to make it powerful. Focus on getting a smooth acceleration, emphasize windup and impact. That will look more powerful than just going fast. 

Some of the one-time pan shots cut off about half a second too early. For example, after the camera has panned from the legs to the sideboob in the shower, it immediately cuts off before you can actually look at the sideboob. Have it linger a bit, or just continue panning after the optimal point to make sure the optimal point gets more time on the screen. 

That's it for now. Hope it helps, good luck with the game.

Only the very last bit. Try loading an older save, I only lost a few minutes.

That downvoting little shit who is offended by the idea of the barkeep who drugged your childhood friend splattering over the screen... That is the biggest faggot of all.

Let's Gooo!

Time to detox her, and then murder that faggot barkeep...

Wow, this game is amazing - amazingly bad. 

Tons of "choices" with only one option.

No control over your actions whatsoever, in a game themed around power and corruption. 

Misleading options that spit on the rare choices you do get to make. 

For example, I select the option to watch a movie with Myla, but what MC does is mind control and sexually assault Myla, without any chance for me to decide not to do that. Sure, I can pick if I want spaghetti or sushi, but choices that matter? Nah, can't have that. Why have choices at all then? 

And what is with that backwards freeroam? You unlock places by watching events, rather than unlocking events by exploring and interacting with the world? The base layer of the game world, the basis of the MC's existence, is a menu to switch between story and locations? Yeah, that's so immersive, it's the bEsT fReE rOaM eVaR (copied from obvious sarcasm).

This is so anti-immersive and dissonant, I got sick of it before even starting the first chapter, just from the awful intro and that "watch a movie" turning into a SA scene.

Maybe you'll think a few things over for the next update. Or not. That's your choice, and unlike the players, you get the luxury to actually make it. 

Say, are you aware that what rating a dozen games at once does to the feed of people who followed you and others here for info on their games?

I guess I'll be checking back when (if) I randomly remember this game exists.

As long as you're making progress, you'll eventually get there. Even when you're deleting stuff, you are learning, moving closer to writing something that is worth keeping. 

If you ever feel bad about not being fast enough, remember that people like George Martin and Patrick Rothfuss exist - both unable and unwilling to finish their stories after more than a decade of zero progress. 

In regard to lewd scenes, obviously I'd pick as many as possible - NOT! As much as possible, yes. As many as possible, no. Yes, I said that twice. 

It's a flaw in many harem games that as you progress, the story can't develop properly because there are so many girls, each of them having a sex scene every few minutes. So instead of the story steadily ramping up in pace and tension, it peters out into a slow, constantly interrupted trickle. That's unsatisfying when most of the early game was full of story developments. The issue is further exascerbated by the player's... physical limitations for the number of lewd scenes they can enjoy in one sitting, leading them to stop reading to preserve the scenes when they're still interested in more story. It's better to have fewer scenes, but for those to be longer and better fleshed out.

TL;DR: Not necessarily more scenes, but longer, harder, deeper ones. 

That's good to hear, thanks.

Since then, I also found a similar mixup with Claire's lens dialogue portaits, and that Monique's second costume shows Bianca's dialogue portraits under the lens. 

BTW, are there plans for lens versions of the alternative costumes?

Are you aware that the assets for cadet's dialogue portraits are swapped when using the lens? Her angry portrait shows up instead of thoughtful, sad instead of angry, and so on. It's quite immersion-breaking.

I actually thought it would be fixed in this version, but it seems nobody even noticed. 

Also, can we have font options? The current one just doesn't read well due to the lettters extending where they shouldn't. Some letters are also malformed and easily mistaken. For example, I keep reading "Ladet" instead of "Cadet" because the C looks more like an L. The font you had before was much clearer. 

Edit: Screenshots

I do have an idea about that. I think it would be much easier to maintain the collection if you separated out all the abandoned games. I checked out about a dozen I didn't know or remember and almost all were dead. 

Shit, that's a lot. Somehow got one you're missing.

https://classy-lemon.itch.io/projekt-passion

I am talking about reality, not the game. Learn how linear time works, and then learn not to respond to posts that are two years old with "future knowledge" as if that would retroactively change the facts at the time.

Now, it's very obvious that this conversation exceeds your mental capacity despite being quite simple, so I would suggest you go and work on that instead of bothering me.

Bro, learn how linear time and causality work.