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endmeleef

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Hello, when writing dialogue, it's better to start a new paragraph when a different person speaks or takes an action, as it makes it clearer that someone new is talking/doing something.

For example, this paragraph:

"You're Adrian's sister." Dante kicks the ball towards her, watching her easily catch it with the toe of her cleats, and uses it to bump the ball up and into her hands. "I am. But who are you?


Would look like this:

"You're Adrian's sister." Dante kicks the ball towards her, watching her easily catch it with the toe of her cleats, and uses it to bump the ball up and into her hands. 

"I am. But who are you?"


These changes make dialogue a lot easier to follow imo. Hope this helps, and I'm excited to see where this story goes.

My bad, I usually don't read content warnings so I missed that.

Would it be possible to add a way to adjust music volume? The music's great but it's a little loud sometimes.

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-Be L

-Fuck your employee

-Fire them because they caught feelings(?)

-Hire someone who is unqualified because they're your friend and you find them hot

L is kind of a terrible person, huh?

justice for marisol :(

peak

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and the Marquessa!

I need more Lumi!!

v3 the goat

absolutely need more of this