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I deleted my twitter, it was getting too stressful to maintain and see all the bad news. Starscream (They/Them)#8381 here's my discord if u wanna friend me. I saw your talk at the creative show case! (im going by z starscream antares)

ALSO THE FOREHEAD KISS AND THE FEEL OF OTHER PLANETS GIVES THIS UNIVERSE SEEM SO ALIVE AND VAST AND AAA

REVEK IS SO FUCKING CUTE AND I LOVE THE CHEST MOUTH AND REVEK DRINKING THROUGH A TINY STRAW INTO THEIR TINY CHEST AND AAAAA

AND SPARKLE SHAKES

AND CUTENESSSS

AAAAAA

this is cool, i can see myself using it when im in distress and need to calm down

The record scratch when you shave off the eybrows is just gold lol

all the birb noises made me laugh

This reminds me of what happened to Sokka in Avatar: The Last Airbender

So creepy

Thanks for replying! I did find the passcodes via by watching a let's play! I did beat the game and loved it!

thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! It was fun thinking about what Gir would do, hehehehe. Writing this one was pretty easy once I got the hang of it because I could go as weird as I want BECAUSE ITS IMPOSSIBLE TO OUTWEIRD AND OUTABSURD THE SHOW.

is it supposed to loop like that?

what program did you use to make this?

this is a nice game

lmaaaao those repairs. nice quick game, what programming language this is? 

ouch, playing this emotionally hurt, i hope you found people that accepted all of you

whelp the cat just ate me because I pet it so much lmao

alma scares me more then the cat ever did, because people like her exist in real life

I'm stuck, I made it to the laundry room but got nothing added to my bag and I went into the bedroom and can't find the 2 other passcodes for the drawers. Cant find the secret room either. Can you drop some hints? 

Just wanted to say, I played this to the end.

okay so i finally got around to playing this...is there a walkthrough? i got stuck after i got the shirt, the iguanna, the collar, the paint, and the beanie and the instagram photo. i exited and lost all my progress :/

I spent an hour playing this today! I love it. I found the humor great, loved the references to x-men and spiderman and the random stores.

this game looks super cute and interesting and i super want to play but my own anxiety got super spooked after the giant letters of YOU NEED TO LEAVE NOW at the IV bags

AAAA

it gave me a heart attack

I'm really loving the colors and the lighting along with the music.  It's super relaxing to play and I like all the different quests intertwine!

Game Title/URL: https://eelwaffles.itch.io/upgrades

Pitch/Information: A mutant survivor of Transigen copes with body dysmorphia. (X-Men AU Fic). It's an interactive twine fanfic with two endings dealing with themes of body modification, reclaiming one's body after trauma and coping with anxiety along with the stress of dealing with family. 

I'd like feedback on: Grammer, world building, pacing, plot holes, the storyline itself, if the writing is engrossing. 

I need help on: Keeping the storyline interesting.

Live comments! 

Did not expect the clapping, that caught me by surprise. The dice animation is cool. Man, the sounds of empty hell is eerie.

As I keep playing the game, the omnious feelings build. The sound effects really add to the atmosphere. Same with the emphasis on things getting cold.

Can confirm firefox gives it issues.

Holy crap, I haven't even started the game yet and the landing page/game screenshots LOOOK SOOO PROFESSIONAL. How long did it take you to do the art ?

what game ending did you use to make this?

Oh maaan, the spreadsheets is a great idea.

Hope you feel better! I also followed your page and I look forward to any drafts you make of sleeping beauty wlw!

Thats a great title screen! I love how the letters float!

It's inspirational seeing you make this, since you started with zero experience in programming!

I mostly finished the neoprene top page today. Just have one little bit to finish. I ended up cutting out the hair accessory options I wanted to work on. But I'm started to feel burnt out so -snip.- It was a bit stressful trying to figure out what I wanted to type, psychologically overwhelming. Just gotta finish the two endings then. Guh. The body painting page is defintely gonna need to have its ending merged with it. Two pages is better then four to write for.

Here's a peek of the coding that went into that page. Certain paragraphs will only show depending on what tailskin you choose earlier in the story.

Since this jam ends on the 16th, I think having this storyline ready to play in a rough draft/cleaning up the other pages is my end goal. 

THEN I AM TAKING A BREAK AND WORKING ON OTHER PROJECTS! (like the prequel to this game)

-flops-

how many drawings do you like to keep in batches? also emoting sprites is a really good idea!