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Very interesting story. I've just gotten Bastet into the house, and while there's certain things about the presentation that I'm sure you'll iron out in some later patch, I think the tone of the narrative is something I haven't seen in the other Adult VA's I've played.

The biggest thing that has stuck out is the minding of logistics and economics. Obviously it isn't some sort of political or social thriller, but I was surprised at how much focus is on the temporal worries of a people experiencing a unique recession. We never see the other side of the world, but I can imagine the mad rush to move over there to work in the (probably awful) meteor mines, and that's pretty effective for one piece of lore. It also helps that people mention the meteor, and that it's probably related to the other things we've seen and know about. Pretty good execution altogether. 

I also like the relationships the Player Character has with the women. Mostly. I probably should've known what I was walking into when downloading a porn game called "my family farm," but lo and behold I was still shocked when the classic "YOU write down what your relationship is with them!" popped up. I wouldn't mind if you just set the relationship to "they ADOPTED you," but this is very much a part of a fetish that I can't fully get behind and comprehend (my family is rather male-dominated, and I've never really wanted to engage with sexual relations with the females in my family), so I guess I'll make "2nd Cousin" and "Aunt" do. Still, you have some strong foundations. I think Sophia shocked me a little (in a good way) with some of her dialogue, and while Bastet and Bianca run into some cliches, I don't hate them in the slightest. I kinda wish you slow-rolled Isabelle's arc just a tad, but I understand the pacing, and she still is a cool mystery to dig into. But once again, all of the relationships are dragged down by how much everyone looks the damn same. I NEED more variety. If Bianca really is stronger, why aren't her arms bigger? I NEED muscular women. You're not the only offender of this, I know. I still NEED to see BICEP. 

Still, you're doing a good job. Excited to see how it goes. 

I eagerly await the next update

This does has a lot of potential. I do like where it's going I do have a couple of things to note. 

Firstly, the map is something I hope you change. Not being able to move freely from one barely labeled room to the next was pretty disorienting, but it isn't as much of a problem this early in development when there's little to do. But anything more than what you have, and it's going to get pretty confusing real quick. I would take a look at something like House in the Rift or Hero's Harem Guild for guidance; as much as they're both on Renpy, I think the direction they take to show what is interactable and what isn't is something you take apply to this Unity project.

Another thing those two do well (especially HHG) is having a likeable main character. I get turned off so quickly from an H game if the MC sucks and is cringe or awful or whatever, and I was worried I was going to feel the same way for Den. Thankfully, I do like him, and I hope you can expand on his relationship with this family. I think he and Raven have good enough chemistry, and I can imagine that you'd want to have somewhat of a greater build up to the Unlyfans shoot down the line. 

Something I do hope you change is the models. This last note is the most hesitant, because I don't know how much time or effort it would take to alter the gifts bestowed by scrag_boy. I also think that having different body types leads to a more interesting adult vn, both visually and narratively. I love girls with small tits, just as much (probably even more sometimes) as I love them when they're big. I think a perky ass can go a long way to develop someone's character. Could Sierra be jealous of her sisters for their more profound features? And why doesn't Zoe have MORE muscle? Her arms and legs look identical to the rest of her family! This isn't to say that you need everything to be realistic, because, come on, it's a porn game. I just personally would like to see different styles, because beyond the obvious fact that these models are from different franchises (it did threw me off seeing Daisy for the first time, but I think you recognized that), there isn't that much to physically differentiate from (currently) Zoe or Raven. 

Then again, I also don't know what you have planned. I don't have Patreon, OR Discord, OR Twitter. I mean, I do, but you know. 

Thank you, Komi. I feel myself getting closer to completion. I still need to make that fanart I asked about on that twitter account I deleted

my penor gets stiff just thinking about hitting Evie over the head with a frying pan and her liking it