Very interesting story. I've just gotten Bastet into the house, and while there's certain things about the presentation that I'm sure you'll iron out in some later patch, I think the tone of the narrative is something I haven't seen in the other Adult VA's I've played.
The biggest thing that has stuck out is the minding of logistics and economics. Obviously it isn't some sort of political or social thriller, but I was surprised at how much focus is on the temporal worries of a people experiencing a unique recession. We never see the other side of the world, but I can imagine the mad rush to move over there to work in the (probably awful) meteor mines, and that's pretty effective for one piece of lore. It also helps that people mention the meteor, and that it's probably related to the other things we've seen and know about. Pretty good execution altogether.
I also like the relationships the Player Character has with the women. Mostly. I probably should've known what I was walking into when downloading a porn game called "my family farm," but lo and behold I was still shocked when the classic "YOU write down what your relationship is with them!" popped up. I wouldn't mind if you just set the relationship to "they ADOPTED you," but this is very much a part of a fetish that I can't fully get behind and comprehend (my family is rather male-dominated, and I've never really wanted to engage with sexual relations with the females in my family), so I guess I'll make "2nd Cousin" and "Aunt" do. Still, you have some strong foundations. I think Sophia shocked me a little (in a good way) with some of her dialogue, and while Bastet and Bianca run into some cliches, I don't hate them in the slightest. I kinda wish you slow-rolled Isabelle's arc just a tad, but I understand the pacing, and she still is a cool mystery to dig into. But once again, all of the relationships are dragged down by how much everyone looks the damn same. I NEED more variety. If Bianca really is stronger, why aren't her arms bigger? I NEED muscular women. You're not the only offender of this, I know. I still NEED to see BICEP.
Still, you're doing a good job. Excited to see how it goes.