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The premise for this vn is really interesting! Resurrecting your ghostly friend through an illegal item called the "Phoenix Tear". I can just imagine all the possibilities you could do with that. Like how the friend will react to the modern world (depending on how long they've been a ghost they could freak out a lot). Or if the friend needs a new ID since his death certificate has certainly been signed by now. A whole lots of possibilities.

Now for some of the other stuff. The password part I really didn't get, mostly because I was focusing on the part where MC mentions "18XX" or something like that. And thought the numbers were a part of the password some how.

Overall I had fun with this vn! Hope to see more of it!

Excuse me but when I get the enraged ending I get the following error screen

```

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

ScriptError: could not find label 'altend2'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "endings.rpyc", line 456, in script

  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1992, in execute

  File "renpy/script.py", line 1013, in lookup

ScriptError: could not find label 'altend2'.

It still counts toward the ending tally but doesn't show the "end" screen

Also I got this error on the android version

Sometimes when i get the notification of " severity went down by x"  I noticed that the severity meter doesn't actually go down. Like when I choose to sleep when it was raining and got a total of 3 points of severity going down but the meter was stuck at .75

Git an error screen on the last day of juiichi's route. Can't seem to continue past it either. I'll copy and paste it here. "```

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

TypeError: unsupported operand type(s) for +: 'NoneType' and 'int'

Can't seem to finish day 30 on Android because of it.

Honestly I don't know why, but I'm getting serious Danganronpa vibes when I play this!

I'd first like to say that I love the majority of this vn. From it's unique twist of the protag somehow holding (possibly the long lost demon lord) within their body. Or the meta commentary from the other characters when you try to go through a unfinished route. 

But I have to say that the sheer amount of monologuing from the protag after the dream sequence is seriously annoying. Like if you cut out the entire thing and said " I'm going to an elite school for magical hunters because I caused my classroom to blow up" would have just covered it.

Plus any interaction with the protag's sister just feels overall pointless. I would just cut out most of the morning sequence and just leave the dream part and the "protag looks at the bathroom mirror" part. Then have the protag's mom have a tearful goodbye with the protag.

The main reason for why the monologue is annoying is because it feels like the protag is just breaking the fourth wall just to be condescending towards the reader. 

But aside from the prologue, everything starting from the first interaction with tates introduction is great!

Tldr: cut down on the monologuing in the prologue