I've been following development for quite a bit, its nice to see it finally come out!
One of the things I've gotta say is that it has a really nice premise and character design! Kudos to the character designer and writers.
But as I read through it I've felt like the pacing is just too fast when introducing the whole dream world thing.
I know this project is still in progress but I think the diamond that Gin & MC have should be shown visually (like in a Cg or portrait)
One more smaller thing is that Gin in his real world outfit feels a bit blurry.
But overall I am excited to see the next update for this novel!