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Thanks so much for the feedback! Funny thing is I did actually have those exact theme ideas in mind but I only managed to make a demo and a half that I decided didn't really fit the vibe... it would be fun to complete this though!

I'm honored that you enjoyed 🐦‍⬛

The intention was for it to sound like the player hitting start off of the main menu. Whether that got across or not, maybe it wasn’t the move! Thanks for the feedback

loll the Willy Wonka sample I love that movie

Really cool tune! I heard a few times where the different moving parts don't line up harmonically. When writing a new part, keep in mind what the current chord is so you can stay away from "wrong" notes unless you really mean to play them. I respect it if it's intentional, but it just stood out to my ear!

I like how it builds up to that big part at the end of the song, but it sounds a bit cluttered with everything going on. Make sure you know which parts are more important, and should thus be brought out, and mess with EQing to keep it from sounding this way.

Very enjoyable listen! Nice work 🐦‍⬛

LET IT RIDEEE!!!!

I can't say this evokes the mental image of a casino for me, but I still love where you went with this tune! Really reminds me of some flash games I used to play haha. 

Cool stufff 🐦‍⬛

Very charming submission! I like the direction you went with this. 

I'd recommend working on writing more interesting melodies as well as treating your song like a story. Use dynamics and changing chords to keep the listeners interest. Experiment and have fun with it!

Nice job 🐦‍⬛

Great stuff! I really like how you take your time to develop. 

There's something off to me about the first track though, to me it feels like you were setting up in 3 and then the drums come in in 4 and it clashes a little bit too much for me. I like the misdirection, but for how long that section of the song is, I would've liked to hear it develop, whether you went even further with this polyrhythmic idea or made the two parts fit together more cohesively.

Lovee the second track. Biggest thing I would recommend is to automate the pads/chords in the background, so they're not just flatly holding a note. You could add a lot of shape to the music by just making those background parts rise and drop in volume. Better yet, changing them in other ways! It's fun to experiment.

Overall very nice work :)

ahhh this definitely deserved a higher rating!! KEEP GOING 

I really like how this one developed! Great work

I'll have to check it out!

That surprise in the beginning was unintentional but I’m glad it happened! Thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate you 🐦‍⬛

Really cool and creative sound design. I really enjoy all the sounds coming in and out, like quick statements. Overall great work 🐦‍⬛

Such impressive work especially for that age!! Knowing where the music was coming from made the listening experience feel awfully pure and emotional to me. Hope none of them ever stop making music because I really enjoyed this :) great work.

I LOVE this. Great grooves and lovely chord choices throughout. Easily one of my favorite submissions, nice work!

I can tell how much effort you put into this sounding as creepy and unsettling as you wanted! I love the sound design and the inclusion of the little “sound effect” tracks. They sound great and really make the story flow well. Loved this one, good job!

Such a fun and enjoyable listen! I do wish some tracks moved a bit faster but regardless I think they still work for their intended purpose. Super creative concept and near perfect execution. Great job!

Static silence really takes you on a journey! Great work. 

Midnight Signals works great as background music, but doesn't exactly capture your attention listening to it alone. I'd love to hear some more variation, whether harmonic or instrumental. 

Either way, you did one of the best jobs I've seen at matching the theme and the vibe you've set up!

Love it 🐦‍⬛

Such a huge compliment coming from you! Your stuff is impeccable. I appreciate it!

I like Crows, I like  Kookaburras (me), I like Flamingos, I like Oxpeckers, I like Bluejays, I like Mallards, I like Eagles, I like Ravens, I like Cardinals, I like Owls, I like Woodpeckers, I like Roadrunners, I like Geese, I like Falcons, I like Hawks, I like Vultures, I like Robins, I like Sparrows, I like Penguins, I like Parrots, I like Turkeys, I like Starlings, and I like this submission! Really good production and it feels like it goes together perfectly with your game! In Flow and Diashow are especiallly good.

Nice work 🐦‍⬛

I like this :) Very sweet and endearing submission! 

New York is my favorite, the beginning made me quite emotional. I like the scatting, but it feels like you're locked into only a few syllables. I can tell you already do, but I would suggest getting deep into how the greats do it: Ella, Sarah Vaughan, Louis, Clark Terry. If you want to of course :) jazz is a difficult language!

Great job! 

That means an incredible amount to me 🐦‍⬛ I’m also kinda surprised to see so much love for the opening theme! I’ve changed my mind now, but if you had asked me around submission time I’d say I was the least happy with how that one came out lol. 

I’m honored that you enjoyed it that much!!

THANK YOU so much for the feedback!! 

You’re right on with why I think some of these songs ended up working. I love that Napple Tale song! I need to check out more, could inspire a new era in my composing..

Can’t explain exactly why it works but in case you’re curious the main melody in ETERNAL SUNSET is modulating up in minor thirds! B - D - F - Ab. I find that movement to be dreamlike 

It feels so good for the little things to be noticed! Thanks again 🐦‍⬛

I believe you! The potential is absolutely there. Salud 🐦‍⬛

Soo so cool. And were right, that is a great sax vst!  Everything comes across as well thought out and intentional. (Bonus points for sounding really good in my car too!) Awesome work

Thanks so much! I’m going to continue to post my music on youtube if you would like more! Also the VST is Keyscape 🐦‍⬛

Great orchestration. There are some parts particularly in the second track that feel a little messy harmonically, but in a way it kind of adds to the drama! It could also be a mixing thing. Nice job all around though :)

Thank you!! Glad you liked it. Listening to it rn I’m surprised I’ve never heard Anomalie’s music but I hear it lol

Love the reverse sounds in track two!! I would have loved to hear more of that. I kinda agree with Jofes' comment about the third track but regardless I really enjoyed it. Solid and beautiful project, I wish you luck! 

I've never heard of Tunic but hearing the soundtrack now that's a huge compliment!! Thanks :)

I lovee the sounds in the Chase theme. This OST really works as a soundtrack! I do think some tunes on here could have a bit more polish and intentionality (especially rythmically) but this submission still stands out to me for its creativity and potential! Nice job

Chiptune! All around great submission, night start and the final track are my favorites

damn i feel like shrimp prince..... we the best

Sweet and charming submission, well composed! Wish you had more time to flesh it out a bit more but enjoyable nonetheless :)

The groove at the end of swell and fade is soo good. Also love the sound choice and melody on Ribbon! Overall nice work :)

Both serenity and high intensity captured so well! Splendid submission🐦‍⬛

AHHH thank you!

I have to say how much I appreciate the inclusion of solos. A lot of people can call their music jazz but it's not truly jazz without improvisation! Also some references in there ;) I heard Nutville in track 2 and Dat Dere in track 3 haha. Awesome OST, one of the most original I've heard so far!

Such great feedback :) This all makes me so happy to hear.

Moonlit fields is a hitt. Great work!

Love it! Space songs are my favorite :0

Disturbing in all the right ways. Smell of iron is great! Nice work