Great storytelling, not a sound I was expecting in this jam and I love it! Nice work 🐦⬛
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loll the Willy Wonka sample I love that movie
Really cool tune! I heard a few times where the different moving parts don't line up harmonically. When writing a new part, keep in mind what the current chord is so you can stay away from "wrong" notes unless you really mean to play them. I respect it if it's intentional, but it just stood out to my ear!
I like how it builds up to that big part at the end of the song, but it sounds a bit cluttered with everything going on. Make sure you know which parts are more important, and should thus be brought out, and mess with EQing to keep it from sounding this way.
Very enjoyable listen! Nice work 🐦⬛
Great stuff! I really like how you take your time to develop.
There's something off to me about the first track though, to me it feels like you were setting up in 3 and then the drums come in in 4 and it clashes a little bit too much for me. I like the misdirection, but for how long that section of the song is, I would've liked to hear it develop, whether you went even further with this polyrhythmic idea or made the two parts fit together more cohesively.
Lovee the second track. Biggest thing I would recommend is to automate the pads/chords in the background, so they're not just flatly holding a note. You could add a lot of shape to the music by just making those background parts rise and drop in volume. Better yet, changing them in other ways! It's fun to experiment.
Overall very nice work :)
Static silence really takes you on a journey! Great work.
Midnight Signals works great as background music, but doesn't exactly capture your attention listening to it alone. I'd love to hear some more variation, whether harmonic or instrumental.
Either way, you did one of the best jobs I've seen at matching the theme and the vibe you've set up!
Love it 🐦⬛
I like Crows, I like Kookaburras (me), I like Flamingos, I like Oxpeckers, I like Bluejays, I like Mallards, I like Eagles, I like Ravens, I like Cardinals, I like Owls, I like Woodpeckers, I like Roadrunners, I like Geese, I like Falcons, I like Hawks, I like Vultures, I like Robins, I like Sparrows, I like Penguins, I like Parrots, I like Turkeys, I like Starlings, and I like this submission! Really good production and it feels like it goes together perfectly with your game! In Flow and Diashow are especiallly good.
Nice work 🐦⬛
I like this :) Very sweet and endearing submission!
New York is my favorite, the beginning made me quite emotional. I like the scatting, but it feels like you're locked into only a few syllables. I can tell you already do, but I would suggest getting deep into how the greats do it: Ella, Sarah Vaughan, Louis, Clark Terry. If you want to of course :) jazz is a difficult language!
Great job!
THANK YOU so much for the feedback!!
You’re right on with why I think some of these songs ended up working. I love that Napple Tale song! I need to check out more, could inspire a new era in my composing..
Can’t explain exactly why it works but in case you’re curious the main melody in ETERNAL SUNSET is modulating up in minor thirds! B - D - F - Ab. I find that movement to be dreamlike
It feels so good for the little things to be noticed! Thanks again 🐦⬛



