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Great stuff! I really like how you take your time to develop. 

There's something off to me about the first track though, to me it feels like you were setting up in 3 and then the drums come in in 4 and it clashes a little bit too much for me. I like the misdirection, but for how long that section of the song is, I would've liked to hear it develop, whether you went even further with this polyrhythmic idea or made the two parts fit together more cohesively.

Lovee the second track. Biggest thing I would recommend is to automate the pads/chords in the background, so they're not just flatly holding a note. You could add a lot of shape to the music by just making those background parts rise and drop in volume. Better yet, changing them in other ways! It's fun to experiment.

Overall very nice work :)

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Hey thank you for taking the time to listen and the feedback! i see what you mean with the first track, i wrote it in 4/4 and i didn't even realize its more a 3/4 melody but you're absolutely right. Not gonna lie i just went with the flow with that one, trying to create an evolving loop that would entice the listener to engage in their own thoughts and let the mind wander. I really appreciate the feedback, that is solid advice to consider for the next songs!