Wow, I stumbled across this game accidentally, and I got intrigued by the concept, trying to understand a different experience as a cis woman. I'm getting hooked real quick! It feels slow paced, but in a good way, you're giving breathing room to self-exploration and relationships alike. You're able to make me empathize with side characters as well, there's a depth and humanity to them. I really like the way you write dialogues, the back and forth with Lily, with Luke and Sam, etc. There's so many witty lines, and sometimes profound ones too.
I really admire the effort you put into that elaborate stat raising system, and the dressup aspect as well! And the amount of choice there is, to choose a club, this or that activity, so many branches to explore, makes me want to replay the game.
My one complaint might be some occasional overwriting or repetitiveness. For example, Madame Serena and the mall are described in detail multiple times. I've noticed several times the first paragraph on a new page sometimes just paraphrases the last on the previous (that could be intentional if that's where a previous update cut off, but I guess a little unnecessary when there's the button to go back?). I did run into small inconsistencies, like on the branch where I went shopping with Sam, and then after returning home, mom referred back to a conversation that I didn't remember happening (or I could have overlooked something), but I suppose those are bound to happen with a branching narrative.
Overall, you're doing amazing, I admire how you're juggling such a huge project, and it's a really engaging story! I'm truly excited to read more of it.
