Why did your killer kiss your corpse? And the narration hints he did love MC....but there's not a real explanation of why he killed. Like it hints he was jealous of (spoiler) but that's it. Also I wish we got Avery's POV. :(
chellie
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i love this premise, it gives me revenge manhwa / webtoon vibes. i'm excited for the update T_T
i don't have feedback on the story, more technical things. the transitions are REALLY slow. like at one point i thought the story just cut off at the middle of the page and then 2 seconds later the next passage appeared. i think it's better to have no transitions whatsoever or have the option to turn them off. (i thought this is what "timed passages" were in settings, but turning that off didn't affect it)
also instead of click through responses, can u do drop downs? if u miss one, u then have to click through every single response T_T
i'd also recommend including [end of demo] because i can't tell if i'm at a transition bug (another reason why i loathe transitions), or if this is the end of the content:
No.
Not yours.
He was never yours.
I was trying to read Tang Ruo's POV, and got this error: "Couldn't load scene 'povs.' The file doesn't exist." :(
EDIT (don't want to make a new comment each time)
I noticed that MC's gender is often switched to male, even when you're playing as female. Ex: "You, dogs, got lucky that Senior Sister is so generous. If I was in his place, I would've broke your legs!"
I also picked male for Lu Shu (I think that was their name, the person you meet in danger zone), and their pronouns sometimes show up as "she/her."
