i love this premise, it gives me revenge manhwa / webtoon vibes. i'm excited for the update T_T
i don't have feedback on the story, more technical things. the transitions are REALLY slow. like at one point i thought the story just cut off at the middle of the page and then 2 seconds later the next passage appeared. i think it's better to have no transitions whatsoever or have the option to turn them off. (i thought this is what "timed passages" were in settings, but turning that off didn't affect it)
also instead of click through responses, can u do drop downs? if u miss one, u then have to click through every single response T_T
i'd also recommend including [end of demo] because i can't tell if i'm at a transition bug (another reason why i loathe transitions), or if this is the end of the content:
No.
Not yours.
He was never yours.