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Thanks for the feedback, especially on the issues with the sound sliders!! The puzzles in the game aren’t meant to be difficult at all, really, but these are the first examples of this kind of puzzle, and perhaps we made these first two a bit too simple, though there are more complex versions of this puzzle that will appear later in the story. Much of the story feedback has been taken to mind, and time until release is plenty so revisions can always be made to provide an even better experience!

I’m glad you enjoyed it! since you enjoyed this check out our other games in the meantime. They’re also free to download for your enjoyment!

Thanks! I do plan on continuing this story  in the future. I’m happy what I had to present with the deadline I had was enjoyable!

Thank you!

So I had copy and pasted the twitter text instead of the link (oops) but I fixed that now.

thank you

thanks! I will definitely do this

Thank you!!

The pitch itself is really solid. The only thing I would add is a short summary of the general plot since it is a VN, which are heavily story based (though if you're not that far with the game & are still purely on concept stuff it's fine.) There's also a few grammatical errors here and there that may hinder your pitch in the actual contest.

Thank you! We’re glad you enjoyed it enough to look forward to more.

Thank you! Please look forward to my next one, which should be done sometime in September.