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An incredibly enDeerIng story and a great slice of life Visual Novel altoghether! Also, a very welcome refreshment from all of the drama and misery of NovemBuck~

An incredible ammount of polish with even the little things like consistency of the uniforms between characters taken care of! I don't see that much to be picked out in terms of criticism that I can think about, maybe save for how the pacing is a little lobsided.

Cannot wait to see what other projects the creators might create!

Quite a cute and down-to-earth story! It does what it sets out to do quite well, especially for a first project~

A couple of small issues with the sprites at one point, and the slightly inconsistent narrator/inner monologue inconsistencies, but it easily makes up for it with good writing!
A personal nitpick of mine, is also the way that poetic prose lines are mixed with simple text, but the dialogue is handled really well!

I think to me, the best part of the whole novel is the dinner scene with a really nice CG and cute dialogue (also the highlighting of characters as they are speaking is a really nice touch!)

Thanks!

Does the "Your submission must remain untouched for the following month" rule include elements like the itch.io page, or are those outside the scope of 'submission'? Assuming the game itself remains untouched, of course.

This is honestly, absurdly good. As in, I have no idea how much passion, skill and work would have to go into a project to match this. Moontouched continues to stun with the writing and worldbuilding of the world, which feels alive and mystical.

Now, I am definetely biased, since this VN has just about everything I love in both the world and... well the porn. The reverence, freedom and romance all in heaps. One moment you're performing a sacred ritual in which your life fundamentaly changes, with nudity all around you, however it is neither blasphemous nor inherently sexual. It's just there. Free from such burdens, but not restrained.

The characters react to even the smallest of choices from every poin in the story, or that's how it seems. I've been surprised multiple times, by unrelated events having even a single line of dialogue, making it exceptionaly easy to believe that the characters are a living part of the world that they reside in.

This is also one of the only stories where I found myself liking just about every character, while they are still super unique and interesting. While I liked Kirik least, I still wanted to see all of his lines, laughed at some, smiled at others. All of them are simply exceptionaly written.

And the Crème de la crème - the art. In all honesty... Simply the best furry art I've ever came across and possibly of any art I've ever had the pleasure to see in general. Everything from composition to rendering - stellar. The porn - hotter than just about any I've seen. The ritual sequences filling me with ACTUAL REVERENCE in a game about WEREWOLF DICK. That feel counterintuitive on a fundamental level, and yet. Every background perfect to hang on your wall. I adore the map drawing. And the bloody animations? Simply exceptional.

Only once I felt like something was missing, and it was minor anyway - I really wanted to know more about the tribes, how they started and all. I also realised that I've pretty much never wanted to know as much about lore of any piece of media I've ever consumed, which just made me like the VN more. I know a decent bit about Storm wolves and something about Tidal ones, but I did find myself wanting to know more about all of them. Then I also realised that this is ONLY CHAPTER ONE?? Obviously exposition about everything eveywhere would be a bit much.

I could glaze this VN for ten more hours and I still would have more great things to say. Easily the best FVN I've ever read and in top 5 of all of media I've ever consumed. I understand that it's risque enough not to be for eveyone, however this is precisely what I and many others have ever wanted from a VN.

Cannot wait for more, however if it takes 50 years to complete, I know it will be worth every waiting day. Thank you for creating Moontouched and sharing the world with us and I wish you all the best, both in creating this project and everything else!

Phenomenal story! I really enjoyed the paper aesthetic of the visuals, the soundscaping and I'm a big sucker for hopeless-hopeful stories, that are about finding the best in the worst! Great job!

Thanks! It means a lot :3

Hi! I've noticed a slight difference between the new rules and the ones from this post - Namely the word "anthro" before 'wolf', and would love some clarification on that. How humanoid does the character(s) have to be? Do they have to have a generaly human silhouette/body type, or does sentience suffice? Do they have to stay that form for the most/all of the time, or does the fact that they can/are sometimes humanoid satisfy that condition? Thanks in advance for any info you can provide :3

Hello friends, I'm c_mooon on Discord, and I am looking if any team still needs a writer. I have been writing poetry for a while, but gotten into FVN's and that style of writing not that long ago, so I would still consider myself a novice writer, but I would be very happy to join any team on this jam. I am open to writing more or less anything, whether you already have an idea of the story or want to create it with me  :3

Thank you and feel free to write to me whenever, looking forward to the jam friends ^^