Quite a fun story! Well, as fun as the subject allows it to be anyways, since it does attempt to tackle some heavy stuff. An interesting take on the trope of 'Popular girl tries to be friends with the Loser (tm)', with a pretty decent execution no less. It could certainly benefit from a bit more time spent on visual elements like transitions, but under the scope of the Jam it certainly had higher priorities, and it works well enough. It's hard to say I managed to predict the twist of the story when it wasn't trying to particularly hide it, but the direct reveal of it was still good enough for me to be surprised by some elements. Now, the abrupt endings are a bit unbalanced, since one of them works very well, and the other one comes a bit out of left field; however, again, as the game was made in a month, it's not as much of a criticism as a note. The writing is quite fluid and works quite well, and except for some grammar errors, no major issues arise, maybe minus the characters playing through the entirety of [what is implied to be] Portal 2, but that's more funny than disruptive~ Ultimately, it's a charming submission that managed to keep me invested for the whole story, albeit cut a touch short.