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Bonkyhorni

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I—honestly—just cannot—believe—the absolute—glacial—slog of this visual novel. I am sitting—here—staring—at—the screen and it—feels—like the clock is ticking—backwards—because nothing actually happens except for the protagonist—thinking—the same boring—repetitive—redundant thoughts over—and—over—again until my brain—turns—to—mush.Every—single—tiny action is preceded—by—four entire pages of internal—monologue—that serves no purpose other than to re-explain—what—I—just—saw on the screen, but now—with—extra unnecessary—flowery—meaningless thesaurus-bait adjectives. Oh—he's—reaching for a door handle? Let’s spend—ten—minutes reading about the metallic—frigid—steely—chilled—unforgiving surface of the knob and how it—represents—the uncertain—doubtful—precarious—shaky—hesitant nature of his—very—existence.The pace is so sluggish—it—makes a snail look like a jet—engine—and the worst part is the redundancy is—so—thick you could cut it with a dull—blunt—unsharpened—heavy—rust-covered knife. It’s like—the—AI—forgot it already told me he was sad three—sentences—ago, so it has to tell me—again—using five different words for "gloomy" while breaking—up—every—single thought with these infuriating—dashes—that make the text impossible to read at—any—normal speed.I—want—to enjoy the story, but there is—no—story, only the endless—infinite—ceaseless—never-ending—perpetual void of this guy’s internal—rambling—which is just the same idea recycled—rotated—rephrased—and regurgitated until I want to—alt-f4—my entire life.

I had to specify to the AI to write this comment in this particular style for me btw. Why do this for an entire visual novel mate? The animation is pretty good though

Nooo I can't believe that the canon route is the one where poor kitty gets bit by the viper but doesn't even know about the venom that's crippled her for years... 

I wish there's a good finale with closure for the poor girl

Wow, loved Naomi's plot, but Polly's started off pretty funny and took a 180 straight into one of the worst psycho bitch out of nowhere. Her unapologetic attitude and going out of her way to be unnecessarily cruel toward a supportive bf is a bit unrealistic in how terms of character consistency. Her wanting to hurt the bf out of some unwarranted spite would've inspired me to dedicate revenge on her and the people involved, especially since she quit her job and has a career to lose.

Is there a setting to change the message scrolling to player click instead of having to scroll back up only to be pulled back down again, and then back up to find what I missed only for the screen to go black with the clock ticking. I ended up having to zoom by everything and then finally get to read once the chaos ends at a choice point.

Came for the goon, but stayed for the drama and the surprisingly interesting character developments

The tension ramps up a bit slow, which makes the nightmare scene in the beginning a smart choice as hook to keep players interested. 

The plot though is pretty amazing, like I can see the story being adopted by a doujin artist lol. The length of the story seems pretty ambitious, but I think it's admirable that you're committed to branching paths. 

It might be a bit late to change, but I think you'd attract more vanilla players if you kept the ntr and vanilla (i.e. have the ntr scenarios imagined by MC blurred) portions strictly separate for a true vanilla playthrough. 

Can't wait to see more