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A minimalistic game which is fine. I like the movement, it's quite fast-paced. And nice simple storytelling.

The visuals are very good, I really like the trail effect and dark map with a light. It just fits my type of game. Classic platformer, but with the futuristic look! Verry nice game overall!

I like background sound, and damn it it is living life to the fullest hahaha

easy money + exploring the world = GG

I found mountains, stars, not sure if there is anything else tho.

What you could improve are your character animations. It is quite static. Overall is a nice game.

Hey, I checked your game. And give feedback here: https://itch.io/jam/blackthornprod-game-jam-3/rate/898885

Would you check mine too? https://artificialnb.itch.io/vortex :)

https://artificialnb.itch.io/vortex Here is mine.
I will test yours soon and give feedback! ;)

https://artificialnb.itch.io/vortex Here is my game!
Soon I will test yours and will give feedback! :)

Hi, played your game on easy mode and I beat both bosses.
The game has the potential to have a story, I guess you just need more work on it. I liked different types of enemies and different behaviors, that is great!

One thing I don't like is the level layout. All are square with 4 in's/outs. Feels static, but overall, nice one! :))

I saw your game, also my thoughts in the comments! :D

At first, I thought I need to write but then I realize I just click random buttons and writes itself
I like story games, but this one was kind of disturbing haha

I went to the path that Morgan is in a computer. I like the cold-hearted answer "People are just very complex state machines." The chat went from family-like to psychology-like about free will. Also reminds me about religion and stuff, and Elon's Musk perception of reality that we live in a simulation, which makes sense, from a certain point of view.
And that end, "il delete you", savage haha.

For now, I rate 10/10. I can see some improvements on some basic juicy stuff, but now is not the time for that. The game kinda makes you think about some other views on life, a more structured/programmed one.

Good luck in the next games!

Hello, I would appreciate it if anyone is willing to test my game and give some feedback. I would also give feedback back, just link me your game. 

Here is mine: https://artificialnb.itch.io/vortex  , and thanks to everyone!

Very nice game dude! I really like it. Saw the art style and I was like: "Hmm let's download and try this..."

And music, sound, characters animations.. Top-notch! I hope you get spotlighted!

Just one thing: I expected that the main menu is a little bit more interactive with this yellowish character and to see it more alive. But all in all, 10/10 from me.

Well, nice one. I liked it!  Nice lightning job too, I enjoyed the game until I got stuck...

I couldn't get out of here, is it because I'm small, or you need to fix the environment? if I remember, it happened on level 3. Not so sure... I tried to get out, but impossible hah... or maybe I just missed some mechanics. Anyway well done!

Nice one. there is potential to be endless.

Hi! I played your game, and this is my opinion.

First of all, it has potential. But there is a lot of space for improvments.

0.Give some Ambiental music to the MENU scene. (tutorial,credits,play,quit). It feels empty.

1.Hovering any of the MENU buttons (tutorial, credits, play, quit) should at least play some sound, besides slightly changing color. (Change of color is bearly visible).

2.Pressing any of the MENU buttons (tutorial, credits, play, quit) should at least play some sound, besides slightly changing color. (Change of color is bearly visible).

3.Make the MENU scene more alive. For now, it is quite static.
Examples:  -- Some stars are shining.
                         --Some space object is passing by.
                         --Some particle effects.
                         -- etc...

4.Credits page is too long. What you wrote there is not for the "Credits" scene, but for the "About" scene.
In the Credits scene you should put something like:
-- Made by: ...
--External tools used: ...
--Music by: ...
--etc...

5. I don't want to watch the intro. I mean this:  "We are crashing, me and my space girlfriend, etc...".  Make a way to skip the intro. You wouldn't want to read the same story over and over again when you press Play.

6. Spacebar key is quite unresponsive. Astronaut jumps after like 0.2 seconds. I personally think this is not good. Make it jump instantly.

7. Sound is a bit too loud.

8.I cannot press PAUSE or EXIT game while searching for a girlfriend and jumping over alines.

9.Map is quite empty. Add some flying objects, passing stars, etc...

10.Make some scene transitioning. Help link: