Glad you're still up and positive on continuing onwards. Really want to make more as well, just got a heap of stuff to work on patreon first unfortunately. But will be still be up for continuing.
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Thanks for your time can definitely work with that!
It's also great that you devide the sections keeping the dialogue box in mind, kudos for that.
Forgot to link you the DOC files of the previous writer for you to draw inspiration from https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J50A6Sd67X82CZlJW2Qv92KVC58mnZ9x2-MAhwEeZcs/...
Again your work you've done now is more than enough and appreciated. If anything had to be added it would perhaps be a bit more fleshing out on the growth below her waist, and maybe the very last part would benefit from descriping how the magic just needs to push her one more time for extraordinary results.
As you can see in this image, we need two more bimbofication cutscenes for normal twilight
From 3 -> 4 Thicker Thighs more ass
And 4-> 5 Start wearing more revealing clothing (Cleavage and mostly mental changes)
If you can write them in a similiar matter like the previous two in the game that would just be super. If you have any questions just fire away.
your enthusiams is very much appreciated! But yeah 2 for non bimbo twilight are done, we just need 2 more. Hope once you've played some more, we can figure something out once you got a feel for it.
Yeah we haven't heard back from our bimbofication writer in a long long time. Have you been able to play the game and check out the bimbofication scenes we have for twilight currently? Would it be possible to write something like that?
It's all cool. Am all for making more, and pretty sure can get a lot more players to play this. Haven't posted this on tumblr yet to avoid unnecessary hype. Will say it's best to just have Twilight's route done, and then there can be talk about how to proceed or whatever comes to mind.
If you want a patreon based project or whatever comes to mind am all for it and willing to help contribute and have your back. But for now just wanna have a presentable finished route to show and for anyone to enjoy.
''Cheerilee: “You served me well my minion! Now the school is in the palm of our hands!”
Cheerilee throws her head back and gives a fake evil laugh.''
Gosh that was just too cute. In fact this whole S-link narrative has developed really well, absolutely enjoyed it. Even think this is good enough on it's own without it needed to be a bimbo good, probs for that.
Thanks for your continues effort!
Always been having a lookout to get back to provide more material, specially the backgrounds for the classroom needs an upgrade, just been really busy drawing anything but for the game. Will like to change that soon enough.
And the transformation scene is flawless now. Glad to see you implemented to critique and execute it to a t. Well done, the whole scene just goes so smooth.
Alright understood. But is there a current google doc the writers use and share with oneanother? If so would like to have access to it to be on the roll with what could be provided art-wise.
Seem to not be able to proceed the story after the first few conversations if you choose to bimbofy her early on. It keeps saying ''You don't think your relatioship will improve quite yet''.
No there isn't any set date, it's just about being careful not to suddenly lose track of things.
Right now it's all about the writing and the programming to move things along, the art has reached a point where it can quickly catch up with any new material that's out.
Pretty good, you're really developing the whole dynamic here. Good thinking on the optional S-link with the Twilight date.
What we've done for Twilight is that she has 10 S-Links that work s non-bimbo. Then after that it's her bimbo arc, if the player chooses to bimbofy her. So yes yes the normal path and the bimbo path are seperated. Cheerilee can maximum reach bimbo level 5 in the normal one.
Of course you don't have to do 10 S-links for cheerilee if you wish to proceed to her bimbo stage already. It's just a demo afterall.
No you're doing great work here, really enjoyed reading through it.
Since this is just a demo you don't need to have excatly 10 S-links like with twilight so just write what you feel you can. Things can always be fleshed out later.
As for Harshwhinny, don't think anyone minds having her around, we just try to keep the number of characters limited for now. But! Wouldn't mind drawing her non-bimbo form for this shot.
As for the 3rd S-link, it seems a bit more time focused, depending on where the player is in the game before she tells twilight to leave the library. It can of course still be used, since it might still pass of as vague enough of her not knowing how much time the player and her spend.
As for the study group, sounds like an interesting spin on things good thinking. Could easily lead to some group action cutscenes, or a 'private' study session goign the bimbo route.
But yes nothing needs to be perfect, the important thing is to just have material to work with. Good job.
Okay so we have some tasks for you if you feel up for it.
It'll be great if you could write some dialogue with Cheerilee as bimbo and non-bimbo.
The idea for her is that she's a new mid-twenty teacher (barely been working half a year) and wants the [Player] to feel comfortable in a new environment just like her. She's pretty nervous on befalf of her job, while strict at times.
You could write some maybe 5-7 dialogue with her and the player, and they don't have to be long.
One could be about her worrying about twilight studying too much in the library.
One could be about her asking how the player feels in this new new school (Give some options to reply)
One could be where she slips up saying something about her fearing she's not doing a good enough job
She has 1-5 stages as a non-bimbo
If you could work it in that in some conversation she shows signs of being a bit more jolly or less worried that'll be great too. That way everytime she gets a new bimbo level, a new conversation with her can be started.
But it's up to you how may conversations you want to make with her non-bimbo form. You decide the lengh and what feels most comfortable. Does this sound like something or would you like a different task like random dialogues spreading rumors in Sugar Cube Corner?
While that's a possibility on the multiple couple ending, personally it would feel like the weight of the writing gets taken away if there's not been used any bimbo magic at all. Would it be possible to only allow one couple ending if there's not been used bimbo magic once?
It's always good to have willing hands on board. Surely the writers or programmers could assign you some task, but right now alot of things are still up in the air.
The current (why things change) is not that important at the moment. The thing right now is there's only 4 characters to work with
Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Cheerilee, Velvet.
Twilight is already being worked on, but maybe some bimbo lewd scenes could be written, or talking with Cheerilee building her a bit up (Like maybe she's the new young teacher and sometimes asks the player for advice or wants to know if she's being too strict, or maybe she's a total sweetheart and just wants to make sure [Player] is feeling well as the new student etc). Or maybe a few flavor text to talk with Pinkie when visiting SCC at day/night.
Just throwing some ideas out there, but would be best if you ask or get in touch with C.Snacks on what kind of script you could try and go for.
- Might need to have a task manager. Don't mind taking up that role unless anyone else wants. But coordination with the current head-writer might be a good first step. Maybe they can give you some tasks.
If it's any easier writing in the 4chan thread http://boards.4chan.org/mlp/thread/30597556 might make it easer to create a dialogue and have tassks handed out.
-that was pretty lovely, reading through it, it felt really rewarding to choosing to go the non-bimbo path. This would also leave the door open to change her still later on.
Only thought here is that this work beautifully as a demo or a (one-path dating route) where she is the focus. But let's say in the future if it became possible to interact with all the main six girls, wouldn't it be weird to have all the non-bimbo couple endings at same time? Maybe there can't be more than 1 couple ending if everyone is still at level 0 bimbo?
Just wanted to throw that thought out there even though it wouldn't play the slightest role in the demo.
Don't mind drawing the cutscenes once a script is made. Shouldn't be too difficult making edits depedending on the bimbo levels. Would say the art shouldn't be the limitation at the moment.