This looks very promising, especially as the first published offering from this account.
The document outline is great to see, with very helpful bookmarks. Lots of clear writer to GM communication. I love seeing thesis statements or in this case, the Premise written right at the front page. I was annoyed that a number of sections had poor page breaks, leaving titles on the end of a previous page or one or two words dangling into the top of a following page. For how big the mining colony is, even having a rough unlabeled map or layout would be very helpful.
Looking forward to any future versions and whats next. I will edit or add to the comments if and when I actually run it!


