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Alright, so, just finished the demo, really good, some notes. First thing: throughout the game there are a number of small typos and a few examples of odd word choice. I can't give any exact examples, and occasionally it might've been intentional, but there were a number of times where it felt distinctly incorrect. Neither typos nor weird word choice ruin the game by any means, but it seems like an easy, (if time-consuming, to go through all the dialogue,) fix. As an aside, the MC himself can come across as overly formal in situations where it isn't called for, fancy magic school or otherwise. Second main note: oh my god this is easily the most well animated visual novel I've ever played, seriously. The characters moving during dialogue and blinking and stuff, it gives the game so much character. Literally everything, from the little interactable sprites in the world to the individual facial expressions is, to my eyes, perfect. Only three issues with the art. Well, okay, loosely related to the art, really just graphical things. All pretty minor. In a later conversation, involving Celine [said Lilith before edit whoops], when the dialogue starts Annie appears next to the MC as usual, but then teleports over to Celine's side of the screen and stays there until she leaves. Pretty odd, but a very minor one-time bug. Another thing, still involving Annie, is in the last scene with her unlocked in the demo, where her skin color is much more red than it is at any other point. Like, in all other (colored) appearances, she looks sorta dark pink (magenta, probably,) but in the scene, she's flat red. Also, her horns are missing in the entirety of that scene, even the foreplay cutscene (I guess all the game is kind of a cutscene, but... you know what I mean). Probably everything I just mentioned is due to the scene being added in the last update, and (presumably, given its placement as the literal last thing before the end-of-demo screen,) it was the last thing done before release. As for my third issue, in dialogue when characters talk they animate a little bit, and over the course of the entire demo, there would be the occasional time where it would look like someone was animating when a different character was speaking. That's all my critiques really, asides from the fact that there ain't enough of this. It's amazing. Oh maybe make it so we can replay previous story scenes, particularly Annie's (scene where she's slightly under the covers as an example). Talked about Annie a lot here, uh... look, she's just really cute, and nervous, and she clearly needs a hug. I regret nothing.

So before even playing it, I just want to point out that the description of this game reads like a horny version of Inferno, and I'm here for that shit

Honestly I'd be interested in a visual novel version/separate thing with this artstyle, the characters look really cute.

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Alright that may have been the best visual novel I've ever... uh... "read"? Only critique was that when clicking on Raina after the dialogue where she tells you she wants a baby the game throws up an error message, I don't think there was any new dialogue anyway, but still weird. Also it ended too soon.

I gotta say, I appreciate how Reinbach makes his teens actually look like teens, and not fucking 9 year-olds. Excited to try the demo.