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Very interesting! I was totally obsessed with the keep sleeping and keep eating options. Just want to see what will happen in the end. Didn't see that coming. (I believe you do. ) LOL

I think this is more like an interactive story book instead of a game. The sleeping and eating options don't really affect the main storyline. Eventually, after failures, players will go through everything in order to get the game going. And I like your graphic, really sweet!

This is a lovely game. I don't see big issue here. 

The story is amazing! So many player choices. Some of the choices don't seem like they matters a lot, but that's the fun part added to the story. (Very engaging.) The first round I played it, I was surprised by the amount of choices(reactions) which are provided. I can see the game and the world is building in a very large scale.  So the second round, I tried check how many endings will it possible lead to with so many choices. And I was again surprised that eventually they all lead to the same part (the grey man). Very thoughtful! 

I think adding a little bit graphic or background would make the story even better, (or not) maybe just changing the fonts and colors of words. I think sound effect would work great with your game. No fancy graphic, but words and sounds. Would also be very interesting. 

The story is really appealing! 

The only issue I see here (not exactly an issue) is the background seems a little bit distracting. And for me, because of the font and the word style never change, the reading seems too much. (The story is really great.) Maybe highlight some more key information. 

And I like your graphic. Just hoping to see more. 

The best part for me is where you point out important choices. And in the end you give the players an option to go back to the key scene.