Very interesting! I was totally obsessed with the keep sleeping and keep eating options. Just want to see what will happen in the end. Didn't see that coming. (I believe you do. ) LOL
I think this is more like an interactive story book instead of a game. The sleeping and eating options don't really affect the main storyline. Eventually, after failures, players will go through everything in order to get the game going. And I like your graphic, really sweet!
This is a lovely game. I don't see big issue here.