This was a fun read! You did a good job building a sense of tension and atmosphere - it's like the better class of horror movie, one where the protagonists do just about everything right and it's still not enough to save them.

Very tense, kept me reading without skipping any parts. Very well done!

I really enjoyed the tension in this story and how it is juxtaposed not to the calm cool dwarfs. Then all that tension pays of at the end for the cliffhanger. overall great story.

Good job.

killer story!!