Dialogue is a bit stiff but I like the idea. Though the UI can do some work. For example, the credits have white text over a white background. Also, the textbox should have a little more to it. Like a border, a texture, or something.
Yooooo thanks so much for playing and commenting!!!
I also like the idea of Koishi and Louise making games, maybe will do something about it more in the future.
The UI is bad I agree.