- Great layout design.
- Very evocative theme. I got a Labyrinth or Mirrormask vibe from the premise.
- The flavor could have been described more clearly:
- More detailed sample encounter (for Dangerous Encounters); describe the kind of threats the player characters might face inside the Tower...
- ... as well as the ways they can use their Memories to fight back or protect themselves.
- Suggest possible floors/rooms/environments found inside the Tower.